In my case, it's calming to think in that way and of course I will be happy ifthat, when I pass away, the people I love isare there, waiting for my,e and resting in peace. In my case, it's calming to think in that way and of course I will be happy that, when I pass away, the people I love are there, waiting for me and resting in peace.

In my case, it's calming to think of it in that way and of course I will be happy if when I pass, the people I love isare there, waiting for my,e and I rest in peace. In my case, it's calming to think of it in that way and of course I will be happy if when I pass, the people I love are there, waiting for me and I rest in peace.

In my case it's calming to think of death in that way and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love isare there, waiting for mye, and rest in peace. In my case it's calming to think of death in that way and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love are there, waiting for me, and rest in peace.

In my case, it is calming to think in that way, and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love isare there, waiting for my,e and resting in peace. In my case, it is calming to think in that way, and of course I will be happy if, when I pass, the people I love are there waiting for me and resting in peace.

people goes with love, like "person" would go with "loves"

I don´t know I don´t know

I don´'t know I don't know

I don´'t know I don't know

This was also in your other correction. The apostrophe character when you type should be ' not `

I dDon´'t Know I Don't Know

changed to English title case for capitalization of titles

For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, y. You only close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know whenre your maind ihas gone. For me, death is very similar to sleep. You only close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you don't know where your mind has gone.

For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, you only. You just close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know when you maind is gone. For me, death is very similar to sleep. You just close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you don't know when you mind is gone.

For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, you onlyjust close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know when you maind is gone. For me, death is very similar to sleep, you just close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you don't know when you mind is gone.

For my, the, death is very similar to sleep, because you only close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you didn´on't know when your maind ihas gone. For me, death is very similar to sleep, because you only close your eyes, your breath becomes low and you don't know when your mind has gone.

In English, "the" is often dropped from nouns being discussed semi-distantly. Por ejemplo, "el arte" would just be written as "art." "becomes" is correct because the subject "you" is singular "didn't know" is in the past tense, but "close" and "becomes" are not, so I changed "didn't" to "don't"