July 16, 2025
At Today’s English Class
I had to write English essay on the topic of finding from an article in an English class. However I could not write it by the time limit so I was disapointed and nervous because my classmates around me was able to write easily. Although I study hard to remember vocabulary, it was yet practical so I’ll study more.
今日の英語の授業では、記事から読み取れることをまとめて英作文を書かなくてはなりませんでした。しかし私は制限時間内に書くことができず、がっかりするとともに不安になりました。また私の周りにいるクラスメイトは簡単そうに出来ていたからです。英単語を頑張って勉強しているのですがまだ実用的ではないのでもっと勉強します。
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AtIn Today’s English Class
In Today’s English Class
I had to write an English essay on the topic of finding frombased on an article in an English class.
I had to write an English essay based on an article in English class.
The source/topic for your essay was the article, so I changed the wording to "based on an article"
However, I could not writefinish it by the end of the time limit, so I was disappointed and nervous because my classmates around me wasere able to write easily.
However, I could not finish it by the end of the time limit, so I was disappointed and nervous because my classmates around me were able to write easily.
"I couldn't write it" means you didn't write anything
"Were" instead of "was" because the subject (classmates) is plural
Although I studyied hard to remember vocabulary, it was yen't practical/applicable yet, so I’ll study more.
Although I studied hard to remember vocabulary, it wasn't practical/applicable yet, so I’ll study more.
I think "applicable" is a more fitting alternative as an adjective in this case, but practical is fine
At(In) Today’s English Class
(In) Today’s English Class
We typically say "in class." However, for a title, usually you would leave off "in" entirely
I had to write an English essay on the topic of finding from an article in anmy English class.
I had to write an English essay on the topic of finding from an article in my English class.
However, I could not write it bywithin the time limit so. I was disappointed and nervous because my classmates around me wasere able to write easily.
However, I could not write it within the time limit. I was disappointed and nervous because my classmates around me were able to write easily.
Inside the range/border/limit of something => within
Although I study hard to remember vocabulary, it was not yet practical, so I’ll study more. Although I study hard to remember vocabulary, it was not yet practical, so I’ll study more.
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At Today’s English Class
We typically say "in class." However, for a title, usually you would leave off "in" entirely
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I had to write English essay on the topic of finding from an article in an English class.
I had to write an English essay on the topic of finding from an article in
I had to write an English essay The source/topic for your essay was the article, so I changed the wording to "based on an article" |
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However I could not write it by the time limit so I was disapointed and nervous because my classmates around me was able to write easily.
However, I could not write it Inside the range/border/limit of something => within
However, I could not "I couldn't write it" means you didn't write anything "Were" instead of "was" because the subject (classmates) is plural |
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Although I study hard to remember vocabulary, it was yet practical so I’ll study more. Although I study hard to remember vocabulary, it was not yet practical, so I’ll study more. Although I study hard to remember vocabulary, it was not yet practical, so I’ll study more.
Although I stud I think "applicable" is a more fitting alternative as an adjective in this case, but practical is fine |
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