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First time being an adult, kinda nervous
Hello again, my friends. Now, I have a new routine. Now I am a full time worker and a college student. I wake up 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work. I start my work 8am and have lunch break 12am. I go back to my house 5pm and have a shower. I study and then go to sleep. These days, in my free time, I play Ts4. I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?). And now I have a desktop! I'm so happy of that.Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read too.
First time being an adult,; kinda nervous
Hello again, my friends.
Now, I have a new routine.
Now I am a full time worker and a college student.
I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.
I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12apm.
I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.
I study, and then go to sleep.
These days, in my free time, I play The Sims 4 (Ts4).
I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (? it (or run it).
And now I have a desktop!
I'm so happy ofabout that.
Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read too(in addition to everything else).
I'm not sure what "sm" is
I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work.
I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12am.
I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower.
I've always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?).
I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. Sorry, I don't really know anything about tech or gaming.
I'm so happy of that.
Here are two possible sentences that are more natural:
That makes me so happy.
I'm so happy about that.
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Hello again, my friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now, I have a new routine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I am a full time worker and a college student.
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I wake up 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work. I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work. I wake up at 6:20am, eat my breakfast, and get ready to work. |
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I start my work 8am and have lunch break 12am. I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12am. I start my work at 8am and have a lunch break at 12 |
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I go back to my house 5pm and have a shower. I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower. I go back to my house at 5pm and have a shower. |
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I study and then go to sleep. I study, and then go to sleep. |
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These days, in my free time, I play Ts4. These days, in my free time, I play The Sims 4 (Ts4). |
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I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?). I've always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't "play" (?). I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. Sorry, I don't really know anything about tech or gaming. I always liked this game, but my notebook couldn't |
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And now I have a desktop! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm so happy of that. I'm so happy of that. Here are two possible sentences that are more natural: That makes me so happy. I'm so happy about that. I'm so happy |
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Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked sm), but now I don't have much time to read too. Oh, and I was reading Flowers for Algernon (which I liked I'm not sure what "sm" is |
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