Today is Day 100 of my daily English challenge. Today is Day 100 of my daily English challenge.

Congratulations!

I will make an effort to go there tomorrow there. I will make an effort to go there tomorrow.

Time information should be placed at the beginning OR at the end of a sentence.

I will make an effort to go there tomorrow there. I will make an effort to go there tomorrow.

We place "there" or "here" right after "go."

I will make an effort to go there tomorrow there. I will make an effort to go there tomorrow.

In the afternoon, I went ton a walk for some ofa few hours, t. Then I saw the old woman that I gave money to and help to her.ed. I promised her tohat I would buy some of meats. In the afternoon, I went on a walk for a few hours. Then I saw the old woman that I gave money to and helped. I promised her that I would buy some meat.

“Hours” are a unit of time, which means they can be counted. Therefore, it is more appropriate to say “a few” or “a couple” rather than “some”. It seems like you want to use the past tense in the second sentence, so I corrected it accordingly.

In the afternoon I went to walking for some ofa few hours, and then I saw the old woman thato whom I gaive money andto help to her. I promised her tohat I would buy some of meats. In the afternoon I went walking for a few hours and then I saw the old woman to whom I give money to help her. I promised her that I would buy some meat.

In the afternoon I went tofor a walk for some of hours, thena few hours and I saw the old woman that. So I gave her some money andto help to her. I promiseasked her to buy some of meats. In the afternoon I went for a walk for a few hours and I saw the old woman. So I gave her some money to help her. I asked her to buy some of meat.

I saw on her eyes the happiness in her eyes. I saw the happiness in her eyes.

Subject + Verb + Object (SVO) is the basic sentence order in English, so: I + saw + the happiness…etc.

I saw on her eyes the happiness in her eyes. I saw the happiness in her eyes.

I saw on her eyes the happineshappiness in her eyes. I saw happiness in her eyes.

I love to help the people. I love to help people.

If you mean this as a habit, “the” is unnecessary. I love to help people = I love to help anyone I love to help the people = I love to help specific people, but not everyone

I love to help the people. I love to help people.

I love to help the people. I love to help people.

After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some of videos because I want to openstart my own Cchannel. After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some videos because I want to start my own channel.

As far as I know, people tend to say “start a channel”. - “Channel” is not a name, it’s a category. You don’t have to capitalize it.

After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some of videos because I want to openstart my own Cchannel. After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some videos because I want to start my own channel.

Good for you!

After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some of videos because I want to open my own Cchannel. After tomorrow, I will start to prepare some videos because I want to open my own channel.

I hope to acheieve my aim. I hope to achieve my aim.

“I before E except after C.”

I know I cannot to help all the people ofin the world, but I can help some of people. I know I cannot help all the people in the world, but I can help some people.

I know I cannot to help all the people ofin the world but I can help some of the people. I know I cannot help all the people in the world but I can help some of the people.

I know I cannot to help all the people ofin the world but I can help some of people. I know I cannot to help all the people in the world but I can help some people.

I have this dream when I was younger. I have this dream when I was younger.

Two alternatives: “I have had this dream since I was young.” Or: “I had this dream when I was young (but not anymore).”

I haved this dream when I was younger. I had this dream when I was younger.

I have had this dream whensince I was younger. I have had this dream since I was young.

I am confindent tohat I can achieve my dream. I am confident that I can achieve my dream.

I am confindent toI can achieve my dream. I am confident I can achieve my dream.

Yay you!

I am confindent toI will achieve my dreams. I am confident I will achieve my dreams.

I feel so happy when I help some one. I feel so happy when I help someone.

“Someone” is one word.

I feel so happy when I help some one. I feel so happy when I help someone.

I feel so happy when I help some one. I feel so happy when I help someone.