Oct. 17, 2025
High School
High School was my worst and best period of my life. I was a student who didn't call much attention. I had my friends that I still remember with love, but also my enemies.
As a girl, I was jealous of the popular girls' group. All teachers loved them, they helped each other a lot, and having a big group of girl friends was my dream.
I suffered bullying from three of them. The first was a girl who hated me because we had the same last name. The second was a teacher's child, she hated me because of some rumors (she had reasons, but these weren't true), and the third was a guy who parted from their group, he only shouted me bad words in front of everyone, still to this moment, I don't know why. These enemies tried to hit me one time when I was alone in a classroom, and another time they tried to push me down the school's stairs.
I never told my parents about these situations. They noticed them recently, and they felt a bit guilty.
The good part, I'll never forget memories with my friends. All of them, from the first to the eleventh grade. I tried many times to find some of them, but I couldn't. About my friends from the last grades, I still have them on my social media, but our lives are so different now.
Do you believe that bad people are those who remember High School as a good period?
La preparatoria fue mi peor y mejor etapa. Era una estudiante que no llamaba mucho la atención. Tenía amigos que aún recuerdo con cariño, pero también enemigas.
De chica, sentía celos del grupo de chicas populares. Todos los profesores las adoraban, se ayudaban mucho entre sí, y tener un grupo grande de amigas era mi sueño.
Sufrí acoso escolar por parte de tres de ellas. La primera era una chica que me odiaba porque teníamos el mismo apellido. La segunda era hija de una profesora; me odiaba por unos rumores (tenía sus razones, pero no eran ciertas), y el tercero era un chico que era parte de su grupo; solo me gritaba palabrotas delante de todos, y aún hoy no sé por qué. Estos enemigos intentaron golpearme una vez cuando estaba sola en un aula, y en otra intentaron empujarme por las escaleras de la escuela.
No sé por qué, pero nunca les conté a mis padres sobre estas situaciones. Se enteraron hace poco y se sintieron un poco culpables.
Lo bueno es que nunca olvidaré los recuerdos con mis amigos. Todos, desde primero hasta undécimo grado. Intenté muchas veces encontrarlos, pero no pude. En cuanto a mis amigos de los últimos grados, todavía los tengo en mis redes sociales, pero nuestras vidas son muy diferentes ahora.
¿Crees que las personas malas son aquellas que recuerdan el instituto como una buena época?
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HMy time/ my experience during high Sschool was mythe worst and best period of my life.
My time/ my experience during high school was the worst and best period of my life.
I was a student who didn't callattract/receive much attention.
I was a student who didn't attract/receive much attention.
I had my friends that I still remember with love, but also myI had enemies.
I had friends that I still remember with love, but also I had enemies.
As a girl, I was jealous of the popular girls' grouproup of girls.
As a girl, I was jealous of the popular group of girls.
All the teachers loved them,; they helped each other a lot, and h. Having a big group of girl friends was my dream.
All the teachers loved them; they helped each other a lot. Having a big group of friends was my dream.
The second was a teacher's child, sthe child of a teacher at the school. She hated me because of some rumors (s. She had her reasons, but thesey weren't true), and t. The third was a guy who parted fromleft their group, he only shouted me. He shouted at me using bad words in front of everyone,. I still to this moment, I don't know why.
The second was the child of a teacher at the school. She hated me because of some rumors. She had her reasons, but they weren't true. The third was a guy who left their group. He shouted at me using bad words in front of everyone. I still don't know why.
These enembullies tried to hit me one time when I was alone in a classroom, and another time they tried to push me down the school's stairs.
These bullies tried to hit me one time when I was alone in a classroom and another time they tried to push me down the school's stairs.
They noticedlearned about them recently, and they felt a bit guilty.
They learned about them recently and they felt a bit guilty.
The good part, is that I'll never forget the memories with my friends.
The good part is that I'll never forget the memories with my friends.
All of them,I remember all of my friends from the first to thegrade to eleventh grade.
I remember all of my friends from first grade to eleventh grade.
I have tried many times to find some of them, but I couldn't.
I have tried many times to find them, but I couldn't.
About myI have some friends from the last grades, I still have them on myHigh school on social media, but our lives are so different now.
I have some friends from High school on social media, but our lives are so different now.
Do you believe that bad people are those who remember High School as a good period? Do you believe that bad people are those who remember High School as a good period?
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Bien. Lo has hecho bien. Hubo algunos errores con los tiempos en el pasado -past simple and last perfect (have had).
High School was mythe worst and best period of my life.
High School was the worst and best period of my life.
This sounds more natural
I was a student who didn't callpay much attention.
I was a student who didn't pay much attention.
In English the phrase is “to pay attention”
The first was a girl whothat hated me because we had the same last name.
The first was a girl that hated me because we had the same last name.
When you say something like “the girl who hated me because ___”, you normally follow that up with another part of a sentence.
Ex: “The girl who sits by me in class has a pink water bottle”
Since you didn’t do that the “who” is not needed
The second was a teacher's child, she hated me because of some rumors (she had reasons, but these weren't true), and the third was a guy who parted from their group, he only shouted me bad words in front of everyone, still to this moment, Iyelled awful things at me. To this day, I still don't know why.
The second was a teacher's child, she hated me because of some rumors (she had reasons, but these weren't true), and the third was a guy who parted from their group, he only yelled awful things at me. To this day, I still don't know why.
This sounds more natural
They noticedfound out about them recently, and they felt a bit guilty.
They found out about them recently, and they felt a bit guilty.
Since I’m assuming you’re not in high school anymore, you should say “they found out about”, because “they noticed” is used more for events that are currently happening
The good part, I'I’ll never forget memories with my friends, one of the good parts of high school.
I’ll never forget memories with my friends, one of the good parts of high school.
Having that phrase at the beginning is a bit odd, it’s also grammatically incorrect, so I changed it like so
I tried many times to findreach out to some of them, but I couldn't.
I tried many times to reach out to some of them, but I couldn't.
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My high school experience has been very hit or miss, my first year was god awful but as I spend more time in HS it’s gotten better. I thankfully haven’t been harshly bullied, but I think it’s because I’m quiet and keep my circles small. It really all depends on your experiences that dictate how you view HS, not the kind of person you are
Oct. 18, 2025
I agree with you, I was, like you say, a quiet person. I didn't even go to my graduation party because I finally had the opportunity not to see their faces again, hahaha.
Also, I don't want my future child to have this bad experience; I want to homeschool them and sign them up for other styles of activities. I don't want them traumatized or with insecurities like me.
High School
High School was my worst and best period of my life.
I was a student who didn'tbring call much attention.
I was a student who bring call much attention.
I had my friends that I still remember with love, but also my enemies.
As a girl, I was jealous of the popular girls' group.
As a girl, I was jealous of the popular girls.
All teachers loved them, t. They helped each other a lot, and having a big group of girl friends was my dream.
All teachers loved them. They helped each other a lot and having a big group of girl friends was my dream.
I suffered bullying fromwas bullied by three of them.
I was bullied by three of them.
The first was a girl who hated me because we had the same last name.
The second was a teacher's child, s. She hated me because of some false rumors (she had reasons, but these weren't true), and the third was a guy who parted from their group, h. He only shouted me bad words at me in front of everyone, s. Still to this moment, I don't know why.
The second was a teacher's child. She hated me because of some false rumors (she had reasons, but these weren't true), and the third was a guy who parted from their group. He only shouted bad words at me in front of everyone. Still to this moment, I don't know why.
These enemies tried to hit me one time when I was alone in a classroom, and a. Another time, they tried to push me down the school's stairs.
These enemies tried to hit me one time when I was alone in a classroom. Another time, they tried to push me down the school stairs.
I never told my parents about these situations.
They noticed them recently, and they felt a bit guilty.
The good part, is that I'll never forget memories with my friends from first grade to eleventh grade.
The good part is that I'll never forget memories with my friends from first grade to eleventh grade.
All of them, from the first to the eleventh grade.
I tried many times to find some of them, but I couldn't.
About my friends from the last grades, I still have them on myI still keep in contact with some of my friends from school on social media, but our lives are so different now.
I still keep in contact with some of my friends from school on social media, but our lives are so different now.
Do you believe that bad people are those who remember Hhigh Sschool as a good period?
Do you believe that bad people are those who remember high school as a good period?
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Like you, I have mixed feelings about high school.
Oct. 18, 2025
Hello! Thank you for your corrections. I really appreciate them.
Yes, I have mixed feelings too, but if I have the opportunity of going to a high school reunion, I'll pass it up. No, thank you, I'm happy. hahahaha
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All teachers loved them, they helped a lot each other, and to have a big group of girl friends was my dream. |
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I suffered bullying from three of them.
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The first was a girl that hated me because we had the same last name. |
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The second was a teacher's child, she hated me because of some rumors (she had reasons, but these weren't true), and the third was a guy that part from their group, he only shouted me bad words in front of everyone, still to this moment, I don't know why. |
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These enemies tried to hit me one time when I was alone in a classroom room, and another time they tried to push me down the school's stairs. |
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I don't know why, but I never told my parents about these situations. |
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They noticed about them recently, they felt a bit guilty. |
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The good part, I'll never forget memories with my friends.
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Having that phrase at the beginning is a bit odd, it’s also grammatically incorrect, so I changed it like so
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All of them, from the first until the eleventh grade. |
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I tried many times to find some of them, but I couldn't. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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About my friends from the last grades, I still have them in my social media, but our lives are so different now. |
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High School was my worst and best period of my life. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I was a student who didn't call much attention.
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I had my friends that I still remember with love, but also my enemies. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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As a girl, I was jealous of the popular girls' group.
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All teachers loved them, they helped each other a lot, and having a big group of girl friends was my dream.
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The first was a girl who hated me because we had the same last name. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
The first was a girl When you say something like “the girl who hated me because ___”, you normally follow that up with another part of a sentence. Ex: “The girl who sits by me in class has a pink water bottle” Since you didn’t do that the “who” is not needed |
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The second was a teacher's child, she hated me because of some rumors (she had reasons, but these weren't true), and the third was a guy who parted from their group, he only shouted me bad words in front of everyone, still to this moment, I don't know why.
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These enemies tried to hit me one time when I was alone in a classroom, and another time they tried to push me down the school's stairs.
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I never told my parents about these situations. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They noticed them recently, and they felt a bit guilty. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
They Since I’m assuming you’re not in high school anymore, you should say “they found out about”, because “they noticed” is used more for events that are currently happening
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All of them, from the first to the eleventh grade.
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About my friends from the last grades, I still have them on my social media, but our lives are so different now.
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Do you believe that bad people are those who remember High School as a good period?
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