March 17, 2023
What makes you nervous? What do you try to deal with it?
I am not sure, I find it difficult to identify what makes me nervous. But I would say there are certain triggers or situations that raise significantly my nerves. On one hand, it makes me nervous to have a lot on and to have a huge workload. It puts so much pressure on me and doesn't let me unwind during all day. And on the other hand, another thing that overwhelms me is not having the control of a complex situation. All that said, I have ways to get over this. Whenever I feel both nervous and anxious, I stop whatever I am doing in that moment and go for a walk at the park or take the dog out. Of course, don't take this seriously; this helps me, so it may not work for you.
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What makes you nervous? WhatHow do you try to deal with it?
What makes you nervous? How do you try to deal with it?
I am not sure, I find it difficult to identify what makes me nervous.
On one hand, iIt makes me nervous towhen I have a lot on and to have a huge workload.
It makes me nervous when I have a lot on and a huge workload.
IBecause it puts so much pressure on me and doesn't letallow me to unwind at all during allthe day.
Because it puts so much pressure on me and doesn't allow me to unwind at all during the day.
And on the other hand, another thing that overwhelms me is not having the control of a complex situation.
Another thing that overwhelms me is not having control of a complex situation.
"On one hand" should be used for contrasting ideas. For example here, it could be used like this. "On one hand it makes me nervous but on the other hand, I enjoy it."
All that said, I have ways to get over this.
Whenever I feel both nervous and anxious, I stop whatever I am doing in that moment and go for a walk at the park or take the dog out.
March 18, 2023
Thank you very much!
What makes you nervous? What do you try to deal with it?
I am not sure, I find it difficult to identify what makes me nervous.
ButHowever, I would say there are certain triggers or situations that raise my nerves significantly my nerves.
However, I would say there are certain triggers or situations that raise my nerves significantly.
It is natural to use "but" at the beginning of a sentence when speaking, but as it is a connector, you should avoid it in writing.
On one hand, it makes me nervous to have a lot ons to do and to have a huge workload.
On one hand, it makes me nervous to have lots to do and to have a huge workload.
"to have a lot on" is less formal than the rest of your text, better saved for messages and conversation
It puts so much pressure on me and doesn't let megive me time to unwind during allthe whole day.
It puts so much pressure on me and doesn't give me time to unwind during the whole day.
And on the other hand, another thing that overwhelms me is not having the control of a complex situation.
And on the other hand, another thing that overwhelms me is not having control of a complex situation.
All that said, I have ways to get over this.
Whenever I feel both nervous and anxious, I stop whatever I am doing in that moment and go for a walk at the park or take the dog out.
Of course, don't take this too seriously; this helps me, so it may not work for you. Of course, don't take this too seriously; this helps me, so it may not work for you.
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I have been a bit strict with you as your level of English is obviously very good! Congratulations!
March 17, 2023
Thanks! :D
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What makes you nervous? What do you try to deal with it? This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I am not sure, I find it difficult to identify what makes me nervous. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I would say there are certain triggers or situations that raise significantly my nerves.
It is natural to use "but" at the beginning of a sentence when speaking, but as it is a connector, you should avoid it in writing. |
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On one hand, it makes me nervous to have a lot on and to have a huge workload.
On one hand, it makes me nervous to have "to have a lot on" is less formal than the rest of your text, better saved for messages and conversation
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It puts so much pressure on me and doesn't let me unwind during all day.
It puts so much pressure on me and doesn't
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And on the other hand, another thing that overwhelms me is not having the control of a complex situation.
And on the other hand, another thing that overwhelms me is not having
An "On one hand" should be used for contrasting ideas. For example here, it could be used like this. "On one hand it makes me nervous but on the other hand, I enjoy it." |
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All that said, I have ways to get over this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Whenever I feel both nervous and anxious, I stop whatever I am doing in that moment and go for a walk at the park or take the dog out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, don't take this seriously; this helps me, so it may not work for you. Of course, don't take this too seriously; this helps me, so it may not work for you. Of course, don't take this too seriously; this helps me, so it may not work for you. |
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