My visit to the Jyujyutsukaisen museum in Osaka

I have bewent to the Jyujyutsukaisen museum in Osaka at this Friday.

Because of I hadI finished work early .

The museum hasIt had the original mangas and how toinformation about how it is makde Jyujyutsukaisen byby the creator Akutami .

Especially I love Jyujyutsukaisen made me, so it was very exciting .!

It was origin of Jyujyutsukaisen learned about the origin of the manga.

I spendt 2 hours there.

But Iit felt like 30 minutes.

I have bewent to Jyujyutsukaisen museum in Osaka at thison Friday.

Because of I hadI finished work early .

Especially Jyujyutsukaisen made mewas especially exciting .

It was the origin of Jyujyutsukaisen.

I spendt 2 hours.

But Iit felt like 30 minutes.

I have bewent to the Jyujyustsukaisen museum in Osaka at thislast Friday.

‘have been’ sets the sentence as being in the past tense. This means that when referring to the weekday you visited the museum, you say you went there LAST Friday, not THIS friday. There is no need to use ‘at’ as we are talking about a day, not a specific hour.

Because of I hadI had time to go as I finished work early that day.

When giving a reason for why you did something, it is important to know the context for that reason (what the problem was). This is why we say that we had time to visit the museum. ‘as’ instead of ‘because’ is preferable to avoid repeating ourselves, the same reason why ‘that day’ is better than repeating ‘friday’. This sentence is in the past tense, not the past perfect, so we do not need to use ‘had finished,’ only ‘finished.’

The museum hasd original mangas and how toshowed how Akutami makde Jyujyutsukaisen by Akutami.

Past tense - ‘had’ not ‘has.’ The focus of this sentence is the process Akutami used to create Jyujyutsukaisen, meaning we prioritise Akutami.

Especially Learning about Jyujyutsukaisen madegets me exciting ed.

‘Especially’ is a word used to add clarity to a vague subject, and since we’ve already established Jyujyutsukaisen as being the focus of this journal there is no need to use it here. ‘Made me’ implies that it used to have an affect on you, but no longer does — ‘gets me’ implies that it makes you excited then and it continues to excite you now. ‘Exciting’ is an adjective, ‘excited’ is a verb. We need to use the verb here.

It wasshowed the origin of Jyujyutsukaisen.

You must try to include a specific verb in each sentence you make in English, this is why ‘showed’ is better than ‘was’. Since the origin of Jyujyutsukaisen is a unique concept, we have to add the ‘the’ article.

I spendt 2 hours there, but it felt like 30 minutes.

Past tense - ‘spent’ not ‘spend.’ Add the end of the next sentence to this sentence to improve the flow of writing.

But I felt 30 minutes.

see above

I have bewent to Jyujyutsukaisen museum in Osaka at this Friday.

"went" sounds more natural than "have been"; no need for "at"

Because of I hadSince I finished work early .

"since" sounds natural, "because of" is not correct, "because" (without "of") is not grammatically correct.

The museum hasd original mangas and how to make Jyujyutsukaisen by Akutami.

"had" since the entire paragraph is in the past tense

Especially Jyujyutsukaisen made mewas really exciting .

"Jyujyutsukaisen made me especially excited" would be correct but would sound unnatural.

I spendt 2 hours at the museum.

"spent" is the past form of "spend". Need to state where you spent 2 hours at within the sentence. "I spent 2 hours there" would also make sense.

But Iit felt like 30 minutes.

Use "it" since you're making a reference to the time actually spent at the museum and not yourself. "like" required to make a comparison in this case.