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College and stuff

You may know college is a huge thing a lot of people want go to college but, I want go to college and do this in japan i think it would be a good idea you know? but where start? what will do i go to japan to do a college for free? I dont Know you it will be, because I Love chemistry but looks like too far, this japan college looks so much far because japanese people tend to have the brain image like they are so smart and stuffs like that and I dont know.If i have this brain would be good thats kinda of thing i usually think about


Eu queria fazer faculdade no japao, mas faculdade no japao parece muito dificil porque os caras tendem a ter a imagem de cerebro gigante porem eu sempre penso queria ter esse cerebro, queria ser inteligente e coisas do tipo, quero saber oque eu tenho que fazer pra ir pra la de graca so pra fazer faculdade

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College and stuff


You may know college is a huge thing


You may know college is a huge thing. You may know college is a huge thing.

You may know college is a huge thing. You may know college is a huge thing.

I would say 'going to college is a popular choice' for more clarity

a lot of people want go to college but, I want go to college and do this in japan


aA lot of people want to go to college, but, I want to go to college and do this in jJapan. A lot of people want to go to college, but I want to go to college in Japan.

aA lot of people want go to college locally, but, I want to go to college and do this in japan. A lot of people want go to college locally, but I want to go to college in japan.

i think it would be a good idea


iI think it would be a good idea. I think it would be a good idea.

you know?


you know? you know?

You can say this when speaking, but it sounds a bit odd written. Very informal

but where start?


bBut where to start? But where to start?

bBut where do I start? But where do I start?

what will do i go to japan to do a college for free?


wWhat willcan I do ito go to japan to do a collegecollege in Japan for free? What can I do to go to college in Japan for free?

wWhat willcan I do ito go to japan to do a collegecollege in Japan for free? What can I do to go to college in Japan for free?

I dont Know you


I dont Know you

I would take this sentence out

it will be, because I Love chemistry but looks like too far, this japan college looks so much far because japanese people tend to have the brain image like they are so smart and stuffs like that and I dont know.


it will be, because I Love chemistry but looks like too far, this japan college looks so much farI would love to study chemistry in Japan, but I'm not sure because jJapanese people tend to have the brain image like they are so smart and stuffs like that and I dont knoware so smart that I'm feeling like I couldn't compete. I would love to study chemistry in Japan, but I'm not sure because Japanese people are so smart that I'm feeling like I couldn't compete.

I'm not sure if this is what you meant, but I reworked the sentence to capture what I thought was the meaning.

If i have this brain would be good thats kinda of thing i usually think about


If iI have this brain, would be good thats kinda of thing i usuallythat be enough? This is something I often think about. If I have this brain, would that be enough? This is something I often think about.

If I have this brain sounds a bit odd, maybe 'Would I be able to keep up with my peers in Japan?'

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