Oct. 23, 2021
Face same enemy, loss again and again
So, I spend a lot of time on self-practice.
A significate improvement did happen too.
But when I find an old enemy to challenge him again.
The result was a total failure!
I wasn’t even scare him a little.
That frustration feeling was sucks!
So, by only putting large amount of time to train won’t make me become invincible.
Did this experience also happen to you?
How can you overcome that?
I realize as a winner, actually he or she needs to loss so many times before to get a signal win.
That is reality!
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Face the same enemy, losse again and again.
Face the same enemy, lose again and again.
So, I spend a lot of time on self-practice.
AI have made significante improvement did happen toos.
I have made significant improvements.
But when I find an old enemy toand challenge him again.,
But when I find an old enemy and challenge him again,
Tthe result was a total failure!
the result was a total failure!
This sentence should be added to the end of the previous sentence.
I wasn’didn't even scare him a little bit.
I didn't even scare him a little bit.
That frustration feeling was sucksed!
That frustration sucked!
"frustration feeling" is not a common phrase in English. We just say "frustration"
So, by only putteven spending a large amount of time to training won’t make me become invincible.
So, even spending a large amount of time training won’t make me invincible.
DidHas this experience alsoever happened to you?
Has this experience ever happened to you?
How can you overcome that?
I realize as a winner, actually he or shd one needs to loss soe many times before to get a signalhey can become a winner.
I realized one needs to lose many times before they can become a winner.
That is reality!
Feedback
Your English is not bad, just some awkward phrasing. You use very metaphorical language and I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!
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Face same enemy, loss again and again
Face the same enemy, los |
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So, I spend a lot of time on self-practice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A significate improvement did happen too.
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But when I find an old enemy to challenge him again.
But when I find an old enemy |
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The result was a total failure!
This sentence should be added to the end of the previous sentence. |
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I wasn’t even scare him a little.
I |
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That frustration feeling was sucks!
That frustration "frustration feeling" is not a common phrase in English. We just say "frustration" |
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So, by only putting large amount of time to train won’t make me become invincible.
So, |
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Did this experience also happen to you?
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How can you overcome that? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I realize as a winner, actually he or she needs to loss so many times before to get a signal win.
I realize |
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That is reality! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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