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I came back in my plan tof puolish miney skills at eEnglish. I came back in my plan to polish my skills at English.

I came back into my plan of puolish mineing my skills at ein English. I came back to my plan of polishing my skills in English.

Fix spelling “pulish” to “polishing” and “mine” to “my” Use “skills in English” for natural phrasing.

Today, I wShall Write sSomething sShort Today, I Shall Write Something Short

Today I wriWrote sSomething sShort Today I Wrote Something Short

Today I wWrite sSomething sShort Today I Write Something Short

Proper capitalization in your title.

I am 34 male years old, and male I am 34 years old, and male

I am a 34 male years old male, I am a 34 year old male,

I am 34 male a 34-years -old man, I am a 34-year-old man,

Restructure “34 male years old” → “34‑year‑old man.”

But don´t worry, I take a count allll of your commentaryss into account. But don´t worry, I take all of your comments into account.

But don´t worry, I take a into account all your comentaryrrections. But don´t worry, I take into account all your corrections.

But don´t worry, I take a into account all your commentarys. But don´t worry, I take into account all your comments.

“Take into account” is the correct phrase. Fix spelling “comentarys” to “comments”

AndFurthermore, I understand that not all of you like to read a long text. Furthermore, I understand that not all of you like to read a long text.

And I understand that not all of you like to read a long text. And I understand that not all of you like to read a long text.

And I understand that not all of you like to read a long text. And I understand that not all of you like to read a long text.

Use “not all” instead of “no all.”

Today, I only have one anecdote to tell you. Today, I only have one anecdote to tell you.

Today I only have one anecdote to tell you. Today I only have one anecdote to tell you.

Could you imagine that I hearlisten to Taylor Swift? Could you imagine that I listen to Taylor Swift?

I would not have expected that based on your demographics, no.

Could you imagine that I hearlisten to Taylor Swift? Could you imagine that I listen to Taylor Swift?

Could you imagine that I hearlisten to Taylor Swift? Could you imagine that I listen to Taylor Swift?

Use “listen to” because we directly refers to her song.

For starters, I have to clarify I am not a Swiftie so why do I hearlisten to that music? For starters, I have to clarify I am not a Swiftie so why do I listen to that music?

Phew

For a start I have to clarify I am not a Swiftie so why do I hearlisten to that music? For a start I have to clarify I am not a Swiftie so why do I listen to that music?

ForTo start, I have to clarify, I am not a Swiftie, so why do I hearlisten to that music? To start, I have to clarify, I am not a Swiftie, so why do I listen to that music?

“To start” is smoother than “For start.” Use “listen to” instead of “hear.”

Well, there is a simple reason,: that singer`'s voice helps me often to practice my listening, I can afford understand almost 80% of all the letterthe words. Well, there is a simple reason: that singer's voice helps me to practice my listening, I can understand almost 80% of the words.

Well there is a simple reason, that singer`s voice helps me often to practice my listening often, I can afford understand almost 80% of all the lettersong. Well there is a simple reason, that singer`s voice helps me to practice my listening often, I can understand almost 80% of all the song.

Well, there is a simple reason, thate singer`s voice helps me often to practice my listening, and I can afford understand almost 80% of all the letteryrics. Well, there is a simple reason, the singer`s voice helps me often to practice my listening, and I can understand almost 80% of all the lyrics.

Fix possessive (“singer’s”), restructure for clarity Replace “letter” → “lyrics.”

aAnd I have to admit that her songs have a catchy rythm, but I'm still not a Swiftie; that is another level. And I have to admit that her songs have a catchy rythm, but I'm still not a Swiftie; that is another level.

and I have to admit that her songs have a catchy rhythm, but I am still not a Swiftie, that is another level. and I have to admit that her songs have a catchy rhythm, but I am still not a Swiftie, that is another level.

and I have to admit that her songs have a catchy rhythm, but I'm still not a Swiftie, that is another level. and I have to admit that her songs have a catchy rhythm, but I'm still not a Swiftie, that is another level.

Fix spelling “rythm” to “rhythm” Add “I’m”

So, that is all for today. So, that is all for today.

Well, one last thing, I like a lot ofreally like Taylor`'s song " Wood " Well, one last thing, I really like Taylor's song " Wood "

Well last thing, I like a lot of Taylor`s song " Wood " Well last thing, I like a lot of Taylor`s song " Wood "

Well, last thing, I like a lot ofreally like Taylor`s song " Wood " Well, last thing, I really like Taylor`s song "Wood"

Use “I really like” instead of “I like a lot of” because we are referring to only one song. Fix quotation formatting.