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Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and logically everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of houseworking.
Taking into account the equallity lack of time, the best approach could be share housework based on time optimization, that is, parents should take skillful tasks since they should be faster doing them because of the practice over the years, tasks like cooking, ironing, setting washing machine... and teenagers should collaborate with simple tasks like set the table, make the bed, sweep the floor... specially in weekdays when there is less free time.
Added to the above, both parents and young people should do the skillful home tasks together on the weekends, in this way, teenagers will manage to accomplish them in the future.
Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible, so this is an important part of the life family and helps in the mature of children.


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Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and logically everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of houseworking.


Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and logicnaturally everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of doing houseworking. Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and naturally everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of doing housework.

Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and logically everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of houseworking. Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and logically everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of housework.

Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and logically everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of houseworking. Nowadays, neither parents nor teenagers have much free time and logically everyone prefers to spend their spare time doing amusing things instead of housework.

Taking into account the equallity lack of time, the best approach could be share housework based on time optimization, that is, parents should take skillful tasks since they should be faster doing them because of the practice over the years, tasks like cooking, ironing, setting washing machine... and teenagers should collaborate with simple tasks like set the table, make the bed, sweep the floor... specially in weekdays when there is less free time.


Taking into account the equallity lack of time, the best approach could be to share housework based on time optimization, that is, parents should take skillful taskson tasks that require more skill since they should be faster doing them because of the practice over the years, tasks like cooking, ironing, settingoperating the washing machine... and teenagers should collaborate with simple tasks like setting the table, makeing the beds, sweeping the floors ... especially ion weekdays when there is less frespare time. Taking into account the equal lack of time, the best approach could be to share housework based on time optimization, that is, parents should take on tasks that require more skill since they should be faster doing them because of practice over the years, tasks like cooking, ironing, operating the washing machine... and teenagers should collaborate with simple tasks like setting the table, making the beds, sweeping the floors ... especially on weekdays when there is less spare time.

A task can't be "skillful", but it requires skill.

Taking into account the equallity lack of time, the best approach could be to share housework based on time optimization, that imeans, parents should take skillful(more difficult?) tasks since they should be faster doing them because of the practice over the years, tasks like cooking, ironing, setting washing machine... and teenagers should collaborate with simple tasks like setting the table, makeing the bed, sweeping the floor... especially ion weekdays, when there is less free time. Taking into account the equal lack of time, the best approach could be to share housework based on time optimization, that means, parents should take (more difficult?) tasks since they should be faster doing them because of the practice over the years, tasks like cooking, ironing, setting washing machine... and teenagers should collaborate with simple tasks like setting the table, making the bed, sweeping the floor... especially on weekdays, when there is less free time.

skillful is about a person, not about a task The sentence is too long, you should break it up

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Added to the above, both parents and young people should do the skillful home tasks together on the weekends, in this way, teenagers will manage to accomplish them in the future.


Addeding to the above, both the parents and the young people should do the skillfulmore complex home tasks together on the weekends, in this way, teenagers will manage to accomplish them in the future. Adding to the above, both the parents and the young people should do the more complex home tasks together on the weekends, in this way, teenagers will manage to accomplish them in the future.

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Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible, so this is an important part of the life family and helps in the mature of children.


Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible, aso this is an important part of the life family life and it helps in the mature of childrenthe children to mature. Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible, as this is an important part of family life and it helps the children to mature.

Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible, aso this is an important part of the life family and helps in the mature of childrenlife and makes the children more mature. Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible, as this is an important part of the family life and makes the children more mature.

Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible, so t. This is an important part of the life family life and helps in the mature of children mature. Thus, in my opinion, the best option is that parents and teenagers share housework as much as possible. This is an important part of family life and helps children mature.

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