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Just wanna say hi to everyone

How's your day? Today is my first day of using this platform. I hope that I can be active and try to write more and learn from mistakes. Wishes you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!

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Today is my first day of using this platform.

I hope that I can be active and try to, write more, and learn from mistakes.

WishesI hope you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!

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Great job! Merry (late) Christmas!

Just wanna say hi to everyone

How's your day going?

Today is my first day of using this platform.

I hope that I can be active and try to, write more and learn from (my) mistakes.

“My mistakes” is more natural, but you can omit it if you mean to learn from others’ mistakes in addition to your own.

WishesI hope you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!

The word “holiday/holidays” is used differently in British and American English, in some contexts. I’m American, so the way you’ve used it sounds fine to me.

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Welcome to LangCorrect!

Wishesing you guys (are having) a great Christmas holiday!

The sentence would work even without the phrase I enclosed inside the parentheses.

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Welcome to LangCorrect :) I hope you have a great time here!

Today is my first day of using this platform.

I hope that I can be more active, and try to write more and learn from mistakes.

Wishesing you guys are having a great Christmas and holiday!

How's your day going?

Today is my first day of using this platform.

I hope that I can be active and try to write more and learn from my mistakes.

WishesHope you guys are having a great Christmas holidays!

Just wanna say hi to everyone

How's your day going/been?

You can say "How's your day been?" to ask how someone's day has been so far, or you could say "How's your day going?" if it's not near the end of the day. Both are equally natural in this context I think.

Today is my first day (of) using this platform.

I hope that I can be active and try to write more and learn from mistakes.

Wishesing you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!

I think "hoping" might sound a bit more natural than "wishing" as well. You often use "hoping" in phrases like this (e.g. "I hope you have a nice time" or "let's hope it goes well"). Using "wishing" is perfectly understandable though.

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I hope you're having a nice Christmas holiday too :)

Just wanna say hi to everyone


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Just wanna say hi to everyone

How's your day?


How's your day going/been?

You can say "How's your day been?" to ask how someone's day has been so far, or you could say "How's your day going?" if it's not near the end of the day. Both are equally natural in this context I think.

How's your day going?

How's your day going?

Today is my first day of using this platform.


Today is my first day (of) using this platform.

Today is my first day of using this platform.

Today is my first day of using this platform.

Today is my first day of using this platform.

Today is my first day of using this platform.

I hope that I can be active and try to write more and learn from mistakes.


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I hope that I can be active and try to write more and learn from my mistakes.

I hope that I can be more active, and try to write more and learn from mistakes.

I hope that I can be active and try to, write more and learn from (my) mistakes.

“My mistakes” is more natural, but you can omit it if you mean to learn from others’ mistakes in addition to your own.

I hope that I can be active and try to, write more, and learn from mistakes.

Wishes you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!


Wishesing you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!

I think "hoping" might sound a bit more natural than "wishing" as well. You often use "hoping" in phrases like this (e.g. "I hope you have a nice time" or "let's hope it goes well"). Using "wishing" is perfectly understandable though.

WishesHope you guys are having a great Christmas holidays!

Wishesing you guys are having a great Christmas and holiday!

Wishesing you guys (are having) a great Christmas holiday!

The sentence would work even without the phrase I enclosed inside the parentheses.

WishesI hope you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!

The word “holiday/holidays” is used differently in British and American English, in some contexts. I’m American, so the way you’ve used it sounds fine to me.

WishesI hope you guys are having a great Christmas holiday!

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