May 24, 2020
just to check.
As the economic powers of Asian countries get stronger, the number of visitors to Japan will be likely to increase, so we have to make new systems to welcome them.
アジア諸国の経済力が高まるにつれ、訪日旅行者数は今後も増加することが予測されるので、私たちはより多くの旅行者を取り込む仕組みをつくっていかなければならない。
As the economic powers of Asian countries get stronger, the number of visitors to Japan will bemost likely to increase, so we have to make new systems to welcome them.
Aug. 19, 2020
Thank you!
As the economic poweres of Asian countries get stronger, the number of visitors to Japan will be likely to increase, so we have to make new systems to welcome them.
"Get stronger" and "power" are already related, so no need to say "the power of so-and-so gets stronger"—you can just say "so-and-so gets stronger."
What you have is technically correct though!
June 28, 2020
Thank you!
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As the economic powers of Asian countries get stronger, the number of visitors to Japan will be likely to increase, so we have to make new systems to welcome them. As the economi "Get stronger" and "power" are already related, so no need to say "the power of so-and-so gets stronger"—you can just say "so-and-so gets stronger." What you have is technically correct though! As the economic powers of Asian countries get stronger, the number of visitors to Japan will |
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