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I don't have anything intelligent or useful to say, so I decided to talk about my vacation. Since I was a kid i just get obsessed with very diferent things.
In the beginning of the mouth I coundn't stop talking about chess but last week I get obsessed with Transformers and Sonic, I know they are very diferent things but I just love to see and talk about it. It's a bit sad 'cause a I know the interest in theses things will go away in weeks or days on the other hand I'm excited to descover new things on my vacation :)))

(I really like Optimus Prime he so cool ^^)

Thanks for reading!


Eu não tenho nada inteligente ou útil para dizer, então eu decidi que irei falar sobre minhas férias. Desde que eu sou criança eu fico obcecada por diversas coisas.
No começo do mês eu não conseguia parar de falar sobre xadrez, mas nessa ultima semana eu fiquei obcecada com Transformers e Sonic, eu sei que são coisas muito diferentes mas eu amo ver e falar sobre. É um pouco triste porque eu sei que o interesse nessas coisas irão embora em semanas ou dias, mas por outro lado eu estou animada para descobrir novas coisas nas minhas férias :)))

(Eu gosto muito do Optimus Prime, ele é tão legal ^^)

Obrigada pela leitura!

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InAt the beginning of the mounth I counldn't stop talking about chess but last week I getbecame obsessed with Transformers and Sonic,. I know they are very different things but I just love to see and talk about it.

It's a bit sad 'because a I know the interest in theses things will go away in a few weeks or days o. On the other hand, I'm excited to deiscover new things on my vacation :)))


(I really like Optimus Prime he
is so cool ^^)


Thanks for reading!

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I also have to think a lot about what to write. Good job.

I don't have anything intelligent or useful to say, so I’ve decided to talk about my vacation.

Since I was a kid i just getEven as a kid, I’d get very obsessed with very different things.

InAt the beginning of the mounth, I counldn't stop talking about chess but last week I get. But then I became obsessed with Transformers and Sonic, I know they last week. Even though these things are very different things but I justfrom each other, I still love to see and talk about it.and partake in them!

It's a bit sad 'because a I know themy interest in theses things will go away in weekdays or days oweeks. On the other hand, I'm excited to deiscover new things onto be interested in during my vacation :)))

(


(By the way,
I really like Optimus Prime he. He’s so cool ^^)


Thanks for reading!

Just talking


I don't have anything intelligent or useful to say, so I decided to talk about my vacation.


I don't have anything intelligent or useful to say, so I’ve decided to talk about my vacation.

Since I was a kid i just get obsessed with very diferent things.


Since I was a kid i just getEven as a kid, I’d get very obsessed with very different things.

In the beginning of the mouth I coundn't stop talking about chess but last week I get obsessed with Transformers and Sonic, I know they are very diferent things but I just love to see and talk about it.


InAt the beginning of the mounth, I counldn't stop talking about chess but last week I get. But then I became obsessed with Transformers and Sonic, I know they last week. Even though these things are very different things but I justfrom each other, I still love to see and talk about it.and partake in them!

InAt the beginning of the mounth I counldn't stop talking about chess but last week I getbecame obsessed with Transformers and Sonic,. I know they are very different things but I just love to see and talk about it.

It's a bit sad 'cause a I know the interest in theses things will go away in weeks or days on the other hand I'm excited to descover new things on my vacation :))) (I really like Optimus Prime he so cool ^^) Thanks for reading!


It's a bit sad 'because a I know themy interest in theses things will go away in weekdays or days oweeks. On the other hand, I'm excited to deiscover new things onto be interested in during my vacation :)))

(


(By the way,
I really like Optimus Prime he. He’s so cool ^^)


Thanks for reading!

It's a bit sad 'because a I know the interest in theses things will go away in a few weeks or days o. On the other hand, I'm excited to deiscover new things on my vacation :)))


(I really like Optimus Prime he
is so cool ^^)


Thanks for reading!

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