yesterday
Just me being negative ;)
I want to read more. I am reading a korean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now. I'm really, really doomed. I do Science Computer's major, but I started the college without any knowledge, I though that even without knowing anything, it'll be okay if I study hard... But things are not that easy. Everyone seems to know everything, when I don't know what they're talking about. I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.
I am reading a kKorean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now.
I do Sciencestudy Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge, I though that even without knowing anything, it'll of what I was getting myself into. I thought I would be okay if I studyied hard...
Everyone seems to know everything, whilen I don't even know what they're talking about.
I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.
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You could add a transition sentence between the first and second halves to better connect the two ideas.
I'm really, really doomed.
I'm not sure about the word "doomed" here. It is a very strong word.
I do Scienceam majoring in Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge,. I though that even without knowing anything, it'll be okay if I study hard...
The correction is the standard way to say it.
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Well, if it's any consolation to you, look over what you have written here in the past few days. You are improving faster!
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Just me being negative ;) |
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I want to read more. |
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I am reading a korean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now. I am reading a |
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I'm really, really doomed. I'm really, really doomed. I'm not sure about the word "doomed" here. It is a very strong word. |
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I do Science Computer's major, but I started the college without any knowledge, I though that even without knowing anything, it'll be okay if I study hard... I The correction is the standard way to say it. I |
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But things are not that easy. |
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Everyone seems to know everything, when I don't know what they're talking about. Everyone seems to know everything, while |
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I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster. I know that |
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