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nah13

Nov. 23, 2025

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Just me being negative ;)

I want to read more. I am reading a korean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now. I'm really, really doomed. I do Science Computer's major, but I started the college without any knowledge, I though that even without knowing anything, it'll be okay if I study hard... But things are not that easy. Everyone seems to know everything, when I don't know what they're talking about. I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.

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Just me being negative ;)

This sounds like a very natural and casual statement!

I want to read more.

I am reading a kKorean novel ancalled "Flowers for Algernon" right now.

I do Science'm majoring in Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge,. I though that even without knowing anything, it'll would be okay if I study hard...

But things are not that easy.

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Great job! Best of luck with college!

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nah13

Nov. 24, 2025

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Thank you!!! :)

I am reading a kKorean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now.

“Korean” is a proper noun and should be capitalized. You should also put quotes around book titles

I do’m trying to get a Science Computer's major, but I started the collegurse without any knowledge, I thought that even without knowing anything, it'lld be okay if I study hard...

1. “I’m trying to get” sounds better than simply “I do”
2. You should say “course” instead of “college”, since you’re just referring to your major, not your college in general
3. “It’ll should be used instead as you’re using the conditional tense

I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.

“That” can be take out, as it sounds a bit redundant

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Very good! Good luck with your college major!

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nah13

Nov. 24, 2025

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Thank you!! ^^

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PacificOcean

Nov. 29, 2025

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Ofc! :3

I am reading a kKorean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now.

I do Sciencestudy Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge, I though that even without knowing anything, it'll of what I was getting myself into. I thought I would be okay if I studyied hard...

Everyone seems to know everything, whilen I don't even know what they're talking about.

I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.

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You could add a transition sentence between the first and second halves to better connect the two ideas.

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nah13

Nov. 24, 2025

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Thank you!!

I'm really, really doomed.

I'm not sure about the word "doomed" here. It is a very strong word.

I do Scienceam majoring in Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge,. I though that even without knowing anything, it'll be okay if I study hard...

The correction is the standard way to say it.

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Well, if it's any consolation to you, look over what you have written here in the past few days. You are improving faster!

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nah13

Nov. 24, 2025

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Oh, really?? Thanks T-T

Just me being negative ;)


Just me being negative ;)

This sounds like a very natural and casual statement!

I want to read more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am reading a korean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now.


I am reading a kKorean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now.

I am reading a kKorean novel and Flowers for Algernon right now.

“Korean” is a proper noun and should be capitalized. You should also put quotes around book titles

I am reading a kKorean novel ancalled "Flowers for Algernon" right now.

I'm really, really doomed.


I'm really, really doomed.

I'm not sure about the word "doomed" here. It is a very strong word.

I do Science Computer's major, but I started the college without any knowledge, I though that even without knowing anything, it'll be okay if I study hard...


I do Scienceam majoring in Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge,. I though that even without knowing anything, it'll be okay if I study hard...

The correction is the standard way to say it.

I do Sciencestudy Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge, I though that even without knowing anything, it'll of what I was getting myself into. I thought I would be okay if I studyied hard...

I do’m trying to get a Science Computer's major, but I started the collegurse without any knowledge, I thought that even without knowing anything, it'lld be okay if I study hard...

1. “I’m trying to get” sounds better than simply “I do” 2. You should say “course” instead of “college”, since you’re just referring to your major, not your college in general 3. “It’ll should be used instead as you’re using the conditional tense

I do Science'm majoring in Computer's major Science, but I started the college without any knowledge,. I though that even without knowing anything, it'll would be okay if I study hard...

But things are not that easy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Everyone seems to know everything, when I don't know what they're talking about.


Everyone seems to know everything, whilen I don't even know what they're talking about.

I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.


I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.

I know that 'someday' I will learn that, but... I want to improve faster.

“That” can be take out, as it sounds a bit redundant

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