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June Festivals

The feast of São João is part of the June festivities that are nothing more than the European summer solstice celebrations adopted by the Catholic Church, here it is the beginning of winter. This party was brought to Brazil by Portuguese colonists in the 16th century. And they are very popular in Brazil. In the month of June, three saints are celebrated, Santo Antônio, São João and São Pedro. There is a big bonfire, regional music, dance couples, and lots of typical foods and drinks from that time of year and fireworks and bombs.

This year there were no parties due to the advance of the covid-19 and the danger of contamination so many families had to celebrate this party at home.

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June Festivals

The feast of São João is part of the June festivities that are nothing more than thwhich are like European summer solstice celebrations adopted by the Catholic Church, h. Here it is São João means the beginning of winter.

"nothing more" sounds kind of derogatory here

This partytradition was brought to Brazil by Portuguese colonists in the 16th century.

"Party" is more the event itself.

And they areitis very popular in Brazil.

In the month of June, three saints are celebrated, Santo Antônio, São João and São Pedro.

There is a big bonfire, regional music, dance couples, and dancing, lots of typical foods and drinks from that time of year and fireworks and bombs.

"Bombs" usually means something exploding with intention to kill.

This year there were no parties due to the advance of the cCovid-19 and the danger of contamination so many families had to celebrate this party at home.

June Festivals


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The feast of São João is part of the June festivities that are nothing more than the European summer solstice celebrations adopted by the Catholic Church, here it is the beginning of winter.


The feast of São João is part of the June festivities that are nothing more than thwhich are like European summer solstice celebrations adopted by the Catholic Church, h. Here it is São João means the beginning of winter.

"nothing more" sounds kind of derogatory here

This party was brought to Brazil by Portuguese colonists in the 16th century.


This partytradition was brought to Brazil by Portuguese colonists in the 16th century.

"Party" is more the event itself.

And they are very popular in Brazil.


And they areitis very popular in Brazil.

In the month of June, three saints are celebrated, Santo Antônio, São João and São Pedro.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is a big bonfire, regional music, dance couples, and lots of typical foods and drinks from that time of year and fireworks and bombs.


There is a big bonfire, regional music, dance couples, and dancing, lots of typical foods and drinks from that time of year and fireworks and bombs.

"Bombs" usually means something exploding with intention to kill.

This year there were no parties due to the advance of the covid-19 and the danger of contamination so many families had to celebrate this party at home.


This year there were no parties due to the advance of the cCovid-19 and the danger of contamination so many families had to celebrate this party at home.

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