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June 15, 2021. Another day in my life

Today I woke up at 7 am, but like everyday I stayed on my bed. Somehow in my automatic mode I pick up my phone and put in Youtube, my first fail. After a few minutes, actually were probably about 2 hours later, I decied to get out of my bed.
I have concerned with myself I would have a matinal routine, what I did this day. The first things in my day are train my wrists, I have some wrist problems and is a good thing to have a quick start on my day, then I stretche my back and eat. My second fail was didn't eat how much I decied to eat, and was probably because I drank coffee and it's bad for the appetite and I knew it, so actually was my third fail.
In first place I just woke up soon because I had therapy, so next to the time of the therapy I went to the bathroom, I have some problems with the bathroom, and I went in the way to my psychologist's clinic.
In the way I was on foot, alone, what is not a big problem for me anymore, point for me. I was thinking so much that in the middle of the way I forgot my psychologist changed the clinic from place. A little late I arrived in the clinic. During the session I talked about how I am angry of my state, and why I hate so much know everything I do wrong and do not change. She spoke about my escapes of the reality, what I alredy know, so we combined I would delete my social medias and block the Youtube for 1 week, and try to do my important things and don't escape from them. Even there in the clinic I was alredy thinking how I would escape from this, what I didn't, I was strong enough.
I arrived at home, deleted my social medias and blocked the Youtube, was the first step. The first hours was so tedious I decied to read my college book, a good form of procrastinate better than watch Youtube, so I got tired and went workout, my workout was not good. Then with "nothing to do" I slept, I woke up at 7 pm, before my university class, wich I did not watch, maybe another fail. I procrastinate literaly doing nothing till start talk in videocall with a crazy girl, is her nickname. Then almost know I turned off the phone and started to read, in the middle of the reading I had the idea of start a write a journal, and here I am. This is the first day, wish me luck. CYA

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June 15, 2021. Another day in my life

Today I woke up at 7 am, but like everyday I stayed on myin bed.

We say "in bed" and not "on bed"

Somehow in my automatic mode I pick up my phone and put in Youtube, my first fail.

After a few minutes, or actually were probably about 2 hours later, I decied to get out of my bed.

I have concerned withpromised myself I would have a matinalorning routine, whatich I did this day.

"matinal" is a very scientific word, we wouldn't say this

The first things in my day areroutine is to train my wrists, I have some wrist problems and it is a good thing to have a quick start on my day, then I stretche my back and eat.

My second fail was that I didn't eat how much I deciplanned to eat, and. It was probably because I drank coffee and i. It's bad for the appetite and I kneow it, so actually that was my third fail.

Make sure your sentences are not too long :)

In first place I just woke up soonearly because I had therapy, so next to the time of thbefore therapy I went to the bathroom,. I have some problems with the bathroom, and I went ion the way to my psychologist's clinic.

IOn the way I was on foot, alone, what. This is not a big problem for me anymore, pointwhich is good for me.

I was thinking so much that in the middle of the way I forgohalfway there I remembered that my psychologist changed the clinic from placelocation.

"halfway there" is a good phrase to learn.
"Where are you?"
"I am halfway there"

A little late I arrived in the clinic.

During the session I talked about how I am angry ofat my stateself, and why I hate so much knowing everything I do wrong andbut do not change.

She spoke about mye escapes of theing reality, whatich I already knoew, so we combinedagreed that I would delete my social medias and block the Youtube for 1 week, and try to do my important things and don't escape from themnot procrastinate.

"Media" is already plural
"Procrastinate" = avoid doing the things that you need to do

Even there in the clinic I was already thinking about how I would escape from this, whabut I didn't, I was strong enough.

I arrived at home, deleted my social medias and blocked the Youtube, which was the first step.

The first hours wasere so tedious that I decided to read my college book, a good. It's a better form of procrastinate betterion than watching Youtube, so. I got tired and went workout, but my workout was not good.

Then with "nothing to do" I slept, then I woke up at 7 pm, before my university class, which I did not watch, so maybe that was another fail.

I procrastinated, literally doing nothing untill start talk in I had a videocall with a crazy girl, which is her nickname.

Then almojust know I turned off the phone and started to read, i. In the middle of the reading I had the idea tof start a write a journal, and here I am.

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Nice! You say you had a lot of failures, but I think your day sounds quite productive! You went to therapy, and you wrote a journal. Pretty good :D

June 15, 2021. Another day in my life


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Today I woke up at 7 am, but like everyday I stayed on my bed.


Today I woke up at 7 am, but like everyday I stayed on myin bed.

We say "in bed" and not "on bed"

Somehow in my automatic mode I pick up my phone and put in Youtube, my first fail.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After a few minutes, actually were probably about 2 hours later, I decied to get out of my bed.


After a few minutes, or actually were probably about 2 hours later, I decied to get out of my bed.

I have concerned with myself I would have a matinal routine, what I did this day.


I have concerned withpromised myself I would have a matinalorning routine, whatich I did this day.

"matinal" is a very scientific word, we wouldn't say this

The first things in my day are train my wrists, I have some wrist problems and is a good thing to have a quick start on my day, then I stretche my back and eat.


The first things in my day areroutine is to train my wrists, I have some wrist problems and it is a good thing to have a quick start on my day, then I stretche my back and eat.

My second fail was didn't eat how much I decied to eat, and was probably because I drank coffee and it's bad for the appetite and I knew it, so actually was my third fail.


My second fail was that I didn't eat how much I deciplanned to eat, and. It was probably because I drank coffee and i. It's bad for the appetite and I kneow it, so actually that was my third fail.

Make sure your sentences are not too long :)

In first place I just woke up soon because I had therapy, so next to the time of the therapy I went to the bathroom, I have some problems with the bathroom, and I went in the way to my psychologist's clinic.


In first place I just woke up soonearly because I had therapy, so next to the time of thbefore therapy I went to the bathroom,. I have some problems with the bathroom, and I went ion the way to my psychologist's clinic.

In the way I was on foot, alone, what is not a big problem for me anymore, point for me.


IOn the way I was on foot, alone, what. This is not a big problem for me anymore, pointwhich is good for me.

I was thinking so much that in the middle of the way I forgot my psychologist changed the clinic from place.


I was thinking so much that in the middle of the way I forgohalfway there I remembered that my psychologist changed the clinic from placelocation.

"halfway there" is a good phrase to learn. "Where are you?" "I am halfway there"

A little late I arrived in the clinic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During the session I talked about how I am angry of my state, and why I hate so much know everything I do wrong and do not change.


During the session I talked about how I am angry ofat my stateself, and why I hate so much knowing everything I do wrong andbut do not change.

She spoke about my escapes of the reality, what I alredy know, so we combined I would delete my social medias and block the Youtube for 1 week, and try to do my important things and don't escape from them.


She spoke about mye escapes of theing reality, whatich I already knoew, so we combinedagreed that I would delete my social medias and block the Youtube for 1 week, and try to do my important things and don't escape from themnot procrastinate.

"Media" is already plural "Procrastinate" = avoid doing the things that you need to do

Even there in the clinic I was alredy thinking how I would escape from this, what I didn't, I was strong enough.


Even there in the clinic I was already thinking about how I would escape from this, whabut I didn't, I was strong enough.

I arrived at home, deleted my social medias and blocked the Youtube, was the first step.


I arrived at home, deleted my social medias and blocked the Youtube, which was the first step.

The first hours was so tedious I decied to read my college book, a good form of procrastinate better than watch Youtube, so I got tired and went workout, my workout was not good.


The first hours wasere so tedious that I decided to read my college book, a good. It's a better form of procrastinate betterion than watching Youtube, so. I got tired and went workout, but my workout was not good.

Then with "nothing to do" I slept, I woke up at 7 pm, before my university class, wich I did not watch, maybe another fail.


Then with "nothing to do" I slept, then I woke up at 7 pm, before my university class, which I did not watch, so maybe that was another fail.

I procrastinate literaly doing nothing till start talk in videocall with a crazy girl, is her nickname.


I procrastinated, literally doing nothing untill start talk in I had a videocall with a crazy girl, which is her nickname.

Then almost know I turned off the phone and started to read, in the middle of the reading I had the idea of start a write a journal, and here I am.


Then almojust know I turned off the phone and started to read, i. In the middle of the reading I had the idea tof start a write a journal, and here I am.

This is the first day, wish me luck.


CYA


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