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The Hayabusa 2 spacecraft had been observing the asteroid Ryugu from 2018 to 2019 and return to the Earth on December 2020. The Hayabusa2 collected a piece of underground rock and sand. According to today's newspaper, analysis revealed that the stone contained large amounts of water and amino acids. The study of the origin of the solar system may be greatly advanced.


惑星探査機のはやぶさ2は、2018年から2019年にかけて、小惑星竜宮の観測をし、2020年12月に地球に戻ってきました。はやぶさ2は竜宮の地下の石や砂を採取しました。今日の新聞によると、解析の結果、石には大量の水とアミノ酸が含まれていることが分かったようです。太陽系の起源の研究が大きく進展するかもしれません

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June 10th, 2022

The Hayabusa 2 spacecraft had been observing the asteroid Ryugu from 2018 to 2019 and returned to the Earth on December 2020.

The Hayabusa2 collected a piece of underground(the asteroid's/ space) rock and sand.

According to today's newspaper, analysis has revealed that the stone contained large amounts of water and amino acids.

The study of the origin of the solar system may badvance greatly advanced.

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nambatsuyoshi

June 10, 2022

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Thank you!

The Hayabusa 2 spacecraft had been observing the asteroid Ryugu from 2018 to 2019 and returned to the Eearth oin December 2020.

Past tense for return.
You can just say earth, without 'the' or a capital letter.
IN December. You cannot say 'on' unless it's a specific date. E.g. On the 28th March / On the last Sunday of the month

The Hayabusa 2 collected a piece of underground rock and sand.

According to today's newspaper, the analysis revealed that the stone contained large amounts of water and amino acids.

The study of the origin of the solar system now may be greatly advanced.

Since it happened after a specific event, I would add 'now'

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The Hayabusa 2 spacecraft had been observing the asteroid Ryugu from 2018 to 2019 and return to the Earth on December 2020.


The Hayabusa 2 spacecraft had been observing the asteroid Ryugu from 2018 to 2019 and returned to the Eearth oin December 2020.

Past tense for return. You can just say earth, without 'the' or a capital letter. IN December. You cannot say 'on' unless it's a specific date. E.g. On the 28th March / On the last Sunday of the month

The Hayabusa 2 spacecraft had been observing the asteroid Ryugu from 2018 to 2019 and returned to the Earth on December 2020.

The Hayabusa2 collected a piece of underground rock and sand.


The Hayabusa 2 collected a piece of underground rock and sand.

The Hayabusa2 collected a piece of underground(the asteroid's/ space) rock and sand.

According to today's newspaper, analysis revealed that the stone contained large amounts of water and amino acids.


According to today's newspaper, the analysis revealed that the stone contained large amounts of water and amino acids.

According to today's newspaper, analysis has revealed that the stone contained large amounts of water and amino acids.

The study of the origin of the solar system may be greatly advanced.


The study of the origin of the solar system now may be greatly advanced.

Since it happened after a specific event, I would add 'now'

The study of the origin of the solar system may badvance greatly advanced.

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