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Aug. 11, 2021

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Jumping rope 1000

Few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.

Actually few weeks ago I tried once.

That time I jumped almost a hour.

I was so tired for next two days.

So, this time I only jumped about half hour.

Because I want to keep doing that for the whole week.

At first I don’t have any “direction”.

I just do some forward jumping than backward jumping…

As long as I can sweat a lot.

Last night I change style a little.

Instead doing both forward and backward style.

I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute berak)

Feels great!

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FA few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.

Actually a few weeks ago I tried once.

That time I jumped for almost a hour.

I was so tired for the next two days.

So, this time I only jumped for about half an hour.

Because I want to keep doing that for the whole week.

At first I don’idn't have any “direction”.

for your information: «didn't» is an informal contraction of «did + not».

I just doid some forward jumping thaen backward jumping…

than = if you want to make a comparison.

Last night I changed style a little.

Because it happened in the past, you use the past form of the verb

I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute bereak)

FIt feels great!

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Jumping rope 1000


Few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.


FA few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.

Actually few weeks ago I tried once.


Actually a few weeks ago I tried once.

That time I jumped almost a hour.


That time I jumped for almost a hour.

I was so tired for next two days.


I was so tired for the next two days.

So, this time I only jumped about half hour.


So, this time I only jumped for about half an hour.

Because I want to keep doing that for the whole week.


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At first I don’t have any “direction”.


At first I don’idn't have any “direction”.

for your information: «didn't» is an informal contraction of «did + not».

I just do some forward jumping than backward jumping…


I just doid some forward jumping thaen backward jumping…

than = if you want to make a comparison.

As long as I can sweat a lot.


Last night I change style a little.


Last night I changed style a little.

Because it happened in the past, you use the past form of the verb

Instead doing both forward and backward style.


I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute berak)


I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute bereak)

Feels great!


FIt feels great!

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