Aug. 11, 2021
Few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.
Actually few weeks ago I tried once.
That time I jumped almost a hour.
I was so tired for next two days.
So, this time I only jumped about half hour.
Because I want to keep doing that for the whole week.
At first I don’t have any “direction”.
I just do some forward jumping than backward jumping…
As long as I can sweat a lot.
Last night I change style a little.
Instead doing both forward and backward style.
I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute berak)
Feels great!
FA few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.
Actually a few weeks ago I tried once.
That time I jumped for almost a hour.
I was so tired for the next two days.
So, this time I only jumped for about half an hour.
Because I want to keep doing that for the whole week.
At first I don’idn't have any “direction”.
for your information: «didn't» is an informal contraction of «did + not».
I just doid some forward jumping thaen backward jumping…
than = if you want to make a comparison.
Last night I changed style a little.
Because it happened in the past, you use the past form of the verb
I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute bereak)
FIt feels great!
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Jumping rope 1000 |
Few days ago I start jumping rope as exercise.
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Actually few weeks ago I tried once. Actually a few weeks ago I tried once. |
That time I jumped almost a hour. That time I jumped for almost a hour. |
I was so tired for next two days. I was so tired for the next two days. |
So, this time I only jumped about half hour. So, this time I only jumped for about half an hour. |
Because I want to keep doing that for the whole week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
At first I don’t have any “direction”. At first I d for your information: «didn't» is an informal contraction of «did + not». |
I just do some forward jumping than backward jumping… I just d than = if you want to make a comparison. |
As long as I can sweat a lot. |
Last night I change style a little. Last night I changed style a little. Because it happened in the past, you use the past form of the verb |
Instead doing both forward and backward style. |
I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute berak) I just doing forward style for 1000 times (jump 100 times, Take 1-2 minute b |
Feels great!
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