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olivier_chen

Sept. 8, 2021

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Julia’s Story - 3

Sheep ran very fast to save her life
While the giant was chasing her with a knife
At last she reached in a jungle
Where a fairy was sitting a mossy wheel.

She said to the sheep, “My name is Giggle.”
Giggle tried to help the sheep,
And she changed into a mirror.
In the mirror, she saw many glitters.
Countless thoughts appeared,
She could always see what she murmured
When she believed in herself,
She saw sunshine and hopes
Or when she was sad in grief,
She saw black clouds and darkness.

Failure is a good friend of any explorer.
It would make you stronger.
It is a boat of the decision you’d make where to steer.
The rains and storms past won’t make you sad.
It makes your story a shiny treasure,
Little sheep, my dear.

Failures are part of life,
It would teach you important magics,
So you could make your life brighter.
Sheep felt inner energy and strength
She started to climb by saying “I can.”
She fell ten times until she succeeded.
Soon met with her mom as she proceeded.

“My dear Julia, don’t afraid to fail
It would be in the future a lovely tale.
If you keep trying more and more,
You will definitely know where your treasures were!”

Julia felt good now and got ready to try,
Now she said, to hard work is better than to cry.

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Sheep ran very fast to save her life

While the giant was chasing her with a knife

At last she reached in a jungle

Where a fairy was sitting on a mossy wheel.

She said to the sheep, “My name is Giggle.”

Giggle tried to help the sheep,

And she changed into a mirror.

In the mirror, she saw manya lot of glitters.

Countless thoughts appeared,

She could always see what she murmured

When she believed in herself,

She saw sunshine and hopes

Or when she was sad in grief,

She saw black clouds and darkness.

Failure is a good friend ofor any explorer.

It would makes you stronger.

It is a boat of the decision you’d make where to steer.

Great job contracting "you would"!

The rains and storms pastsing won’t make you sad.

It makes your story a shiny treasure,

Little sheep, my dear.

Failures are part of life,

It wouldThey teach you important magics,

So you couldan make your life brighter.

Sheep felt inner energy and strength

She started to climb by saying “I can.”

She fell ten times until she succeeded.

Soon she met with her mom as she proceeded.

“My dear Julia, don’t be afraid to fail

It would be in the futurn the future it will make a lovely tale.

If you keep trying more and more,

You will definitely know where your treasures were!”

Julia felt good now and got ready to try,

Now she said, to hard workwork hard is better than to cry.

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olivier_chen

Oct. 10, 2021

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Thank you so much! : -)

Little sheep, my dear.


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Failures are part of life,


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Julia’s Story - 3


Sheep ran very fast to save her life


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While the giant was chasing her with a knife


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At last she reached in a jungle


At last she reached in a jungle

Where a fairy was sitting a mossy wheel.


Where a fairy was sitting on a mossy wheel.

She said to the sheep, “My name is Giggle.”


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Giggle tried to help the sheep,


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And she changed into a mirror.


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In the mirror, she saw many glitters.


In the mirror, she saw manya lot of glitters.

Countless thoughts appeared,


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She could always see what she murmured


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When she believed in herself,


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She saw sunshine and hopes


She saw sunshine and hopes

Or when she was sad in grief,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She saw black clouds and darkness.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Failure is a good friend of any explorer.


Failure is a good friend ofor any explorer.

It would make you stronger.


It would makes you stronger.

It is a boat of the decision you’d make where to steer.


It is a boat of the decision you’d make where to steer.

Great job contracting "you would"!

The rains and storms past won’t make you sad.


The rains and storms pastsing won’t make you sad.

It makes your story a shiny treasure,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It would teach you important magics,


It wouldThey teach you important magics,

So you could make your life brighter.


So you couldan make your life brighter.

Sheep felt inner energy and strength


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She started to climb by saying “I can.”


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She fell ten times until she succeeded.


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Soon met with her mom as she proceeded.


Soon she met with her mom as she proceeded.

“My dear Julia, don’t afraid to fail


“My dear Julia, don’t be afraid to fail

It would be in the future a lovely tale.


It would be in the futurn the future it will make a lovely tale.

If you keep trying more and more,


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You will definitely know where your treasures were!”


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Julia felt good now and got ready to try,


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Now she said, to hard work is better than to cry.


Now she said, to hard workwork hard is better than to cry.

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