The lLast wWorking dDay for tThis yYear The Last Working Day for This Year

The last working day ofor thise year The last working day of the year

Yesterday was the last working day ofor thise year. Yesterday was the last working day of the year.

We clean our office on this day of every year. We clean our office on this day every year.

We clean our office on this day of every year. We clean our office on this day every year.

Our team consist of 4 people but 2 of our coworkers haved already took paid-holidays —so only two of my boss and I were in. Our team consist of 4 people but 2 of our coworkers had already took paid-holidays—so only my boss and I were in.

Another corrector wrote "2 of my coworkers", which is also correct. However, the other corrector did not correct verb tense from "have" to "had". In addition, a complex sentence (with many phrases) generally only has one conjunction, unless a dash ( — ) or a semicolon (;) separates the sentence in some way.

Our team consist of 4 people but 2 coworkteam members haved already tookaken paid-holidays, so only two of my boss and I were in. Our team consist of 4 people but 2 team members had already taken paid-holidays, so only my boss and I were in.

The other corrections suggesting "2 of our coworkers" are also ok. But "took" should be "taken."

Our team consist of 4 people, but 2 of my coworkers have already took paid-holidays so only two of my boss and I were in. Our team consist of 4 people, but 2 of my coworkers have already took paid-holidays so only my boss and I were in.

Our team consists of 4four people, but 2two of my coworkers have already tookaken paid-holidays, so only two of my boss and I were in. Our team consists of four people, but two of my coworkers have already taken paid-holidays, so only my boss and I were in.

Our team consist of 4 people, but 2 of my coworkers have already tookaken paid- holidays so only two of my boss and I were in. Our team consist of 4 people, but 2 of my coworkers have already taken paid holidays so only my boss and I were in.

I told the* boss to clean our team's cabinets with me, thenbut he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk. I told the* boss to clean our team's cabinets with me, but he said that he had his hands full cleaning his desk.

*I told 'my' boss... Would sound more natural. using but is more appropriate in this situation because you asked your boss to do something BUT he could not take on the task: "but" is used when you are about to state something of contrast to your previous statement. I don't know if I explained that very well, so if you need any further explanation please feel free to ask!

I told the boss toasked my boss if he could clean our team's cabinets with me, thenbut he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk. I asked my boss if he could clean our team's cabinets with me, but he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk.

I told the boss to clean our team's cabinets with me, thenhowever he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk. I told the boss to clean our team's cabinets with me, however he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk.

He is fat and gets easily sweaty forom just a little movement, so he looksed as if he iwas doing a great job. He is fat and gets easily sweaty from just a little movement, so he looked as if he was doing a great job.

Because you are speaking of yesterday you should use the past tense: look = looked(past tense) is = was(past tense)

He is faoverweight and gesweats easily sweat foafter just a little movement, so he looks as if he is doing a great jobworking very hard. He is overweight and sweats easily after just a little movement, so he looks as if he is working very hard.

He is fat and gesweats easily sweat forfrom just a little movement so he looks as if he is doing a great job. He is fat and sweats easily from just a little movement so he looks as if he is doing a great job.

We went to a restaurant whoseere their pizza is verreally good for lunch. or more naturally For lunch, we went to a restaurant that sells very good* pizza. We went to a restaurant where their pizza is really good for lunch. or more naturally For lunch, we went to a restaurant that sells very good* pizza.

*you could also say, "delicious", "tasty", or "scrumptious", all kinds of different expressive words. :)

WFor lunch, we went to a restaurant whose pizza is very good for lunch. For lunch, we went to a restaurant whose pizza is very good.

We went to a restaurant whose, their pizza is very good for lunch. We went to a restaurant, their pizza is very good for lunch.

At athe cashier, I found my purse was empty. or At the cashier, I realized my purse was empty. At the cashier, I found my purse was empty. or At the cashier, I realized my purse was empty.

The second is probably more commonly said though both are natural.

At a cashierfter eating, I found my purse was empty. After eating, I found my purse was empty.

At athe cashier, I found out my purse was empty. At the cashier, I found out my purse was empty.

But I thought, at thate time, I thought maybe he would buypay for my lunch. But, at the time, I thought maybe he would pay for my lunch.

But, at that time, I thought at that time maybe he would buypay for my lunch. But, at that time, I thought that maybe he would pay for my lunch.

He said that he just paid for me in advance for me and give back to him without dand asked/told me to pay him back immediatelay. He said that he just paid for me in advance and asked/told me to pay him back immediately.

He said that he just paid for me in advance for me and to give it back to him without dimmediatelay. He said that he just paid for me in advance and to give it back to him immediately.

He said that he just paid in advance for me and give back to him without delaywill pay for me and that I should pay him back as soon as possible. He said that he will pay for me and that I should pay him back as soon as possible.

He said that he just paid for me in advance for me and to give it back to him without dimmediatelay. He said that he just paid for me in advance and to give it back to him immediately.

I thought, his salary is around twice as much as mine and his body is around twice as big as mine, yet what a small mind he has! I thought, his salary is around twice as much as mine and his body is around twice as big as mine, yet what a small mind he has!

I thought his salary iwas around twice as much as mine and h. His body is aroundmay be almost twice as big as mine, yet* what a small mind he has! I thought his salary was around twice as much as mine. His body may be almost twice as big as mine, yet* what a small mind he has!

*or but

I thought his salary is around twice as much as mine and his body is around twice as big as mine, yet whatbut he has such a small mind he has! I thought his salary is around twice as much as mine and his body is around twice as big as mine, but he has such a small mind!

Probably hHis mind is aprobably half as wide as mine😂😂 His mind is probably half as wide as mine😂😂

Probably his mHis braind is aprobably only half as widebig as mine😂😂 His brain is probably only half as big as mine😂😂

Probably hHis mind is aprobably half as wide as miney mind 😂😂 His mind is probably half as wide as my mind 😂😂