Feb. 18, 2023
Day 42: Calisthenics
I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics. I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me. Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly. So I think that calisthenics is a good idea. I'm going to practice break dance too, in order to make excersicing enjoyable. Today I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips. I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week. I hope that I can do it soon.
Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!
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Day 42: Calisthenics
I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.
I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me.
Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.
So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.
I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.
I'm going to practice break dancing too, in order to make exercising enjoyable.
Today I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.
I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.
I hope that I can do it soon.
Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!
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Good job! That sounds fun :)
Day 42: Calisthenics
I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.
I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me.
Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.
So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.
I'm going to practice break danceing, too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.
I'm going to practice breakdancing, too, in order to make exercising enjoyable.
やった！
Today I started exercising, I started by doing push-ups and tricep dips.
Today I started exercising by doing push-ups and tricep dips.
いいですよ。
I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.
I want to start breakdancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.
I hope that I can do it soon.
Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!
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おめでとうございます！上手に書けています！
Feb. 19, 2023
ありがとうございました。!!!
Day 42: Calisthenics
I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.
I think that it's still too early for me to go to the gym for me.
I think that it's still too early for me to go to the gym.
Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.
So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.
I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.
I'm going to practice break dancing too, in order to make exercising enjoyable.
Today I started exercising,. I started doing push-ups and triceps dips.
Today I started exercising. I started doing push-ups and triceps dips.
I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.
I hope that I can do it soon.
Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!
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Good job, buddy! Have fun with your exercises and dancing.
Feb. 19, 2023
Thanks for your corrections I'll try! I'll do my best
Day 42: Calisthenics
I'm going to start exercising with calisthenics.
I think that it's still way too early to gofor me to start going to the gym for me.
I think that it's still way too early for me to start going to the gym.
More natural !!!! And has that colloquial feel with the ‘way too early’, if you want to sound more formal you can just say ‘it’s still too early for me…’
Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.
So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.
I'm going to practicse break dance too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.
I'm going to practise break dance too, in order to make exercising enjoyable.
Practice - medical
Practise - a skill, to improve, to rehearse
Today when I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips. Today when I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.
It’s in the past, so you would say ‘when’ to place it in the past with the participle ‘started’.
I want to start break dancing but I haven't had thean opportunity to start it this week.
I want to start break dancing but I haven't had an opportunity to start it this week.
More natural
Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!
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Nice 🤘👌 I want to get into it too, in particular with pull ups
Feb. 19, 2023
Thanks for your corrections. Pull ups are hard but worth it!! Good luck
Day 42: Calisthenics
I think that it's still too early to go to the gym for me.
Also because if I get into university I'm not going to have enough time to go to the gym regularly.
So I think that calisthenics is a good idea.
I'm going to practice break danceing too, in order to make excersiccising enjoyable.
I'm going to practice break dancing too, in order to make exercising enjoyable.
Today I started exercising, I started doing push-ups and tricep dips.
I want to start break dancing but I haven't had the opportunity this week.
I hope that I can do it soon.
Thanks for reading and for all of your corrections!!
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Your English is so good! Great job making the decision to commit to an exercise plan. I agree with you - for me exercise needs to feel enjoyable and not like a chore, otherwise I cannot retain the habit. We are all different in what we might find enjoyable... for me, it took years to realize that I love to run outdoors. Now I look forward to it every day and I feel so much healthier.
Feb. 19, 2023
Right? I love to run outdoors, too. It's amazing that you found a way to make exercising something fun and that you are now healthier, keep it up!! Thanks for your corrections!!!
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I'm going to practice break dance too, in order to make excersicing enjoyable.
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