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Trixie was lying on a grass, it was itching her back, but she didn’t think about it, her thoughts was already elsewhere – in her past. Deep down in her own heart she known that it’s still a little bit of Trixie stays inside her, and she desperately tried to get rid of it; she felt so much embarrassment, it was like a couple of big bags with stone suddenly fell on her shoulders, and she desperately tried to took them away, but the more she tried – the more heavily bags become. And then she opened her eyes, she didn’t realize that she was lying on a grass for 2 hours straight with closed eyes; that idea made her tense at first, but then she was calmed again, heart was back to her rhythm, shoulders didn’t hurt anymore, and before her eyes stretched out a beautiful view. Thousands of stars which laying on a blanket – the sky. After such a nap she decided to stood on her hooves and immediately catch some glances from ponies; there was two fillies which make their way to Ponyville, when Trixie looked on their eyes, she was mesmerized, the whole moon reflected in their own eyes, but wasn’t that thing that shocked her – In their eyes she saw herself, helself from the past, when just boasted at their ponies, and acting selfishly in front of them; she finally understood how much pain she bring into them, and how much they tried to forget it, but they couldn’t do that, they just…can’t! After such realization Trixie drowned into herself, her own thoughts just grabbed her with a death grip, and deep deep in her heart she encountered her – Trixie Luramoon, it was reflection, shattered into dozens of pieces but still in a whole. She saw her every moment, every time when she was selfish, and every that moment was with whisper – it that life a really want? Whisper became a yelling, and Trixie coundn’t stop it, until she said there words - I accept this; for a moment all the yelling stopped – I accept my past, and accept all my poor acts, all what I did, and I didn’t have intentions to forget it, I realized that my past wasn’t the curse, it was a blessing; my past like a beacon, the lights that path that I wanted to be mine, and past couldn’t interfere into it! I’m doing my choices now, and I’m who can forge my future. I wouldn’t able to erase my past, but I had a chance to make this path to guide me! Guide into future, which more brighter that my past! In that moment, thin
Trixie's reflection
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There is way too much text for me to do much detailed corrections, but you seem to struggle with verb tenses in particular. Either way, hope this helps!
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Trixie was lying on a grass, it was itching her back, but she didn’t think about it, her thoughts was already elsewhere – in her past. Trixie was lying on a patch of grass |
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Deep down in her own heart she known that it’s still a little bit of Trixie stays inside her, and she desperately tried to get rid of it; she felt so much embarrassment, it was like a couple of big bags with stone suddenly fell on her shoulders, and she desperately tried to took them away, but the more she tried – Deep down in her own heart she kn |
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the more heavily bags become. the more heav |
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And then she opened her eyes, she didn’t realize that she was lying on a grass for 2 hours straight with closed eyes; that idea made her tense at first, but then she was calmed again, heart was back to her rhythm, shoulders didn’t hurt anymore, and before her eyes stretched out a beautiful view. And then she opened her eyes |
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Thousands of stars which laying on a blanket – the sky. Thousands of stars which la |
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After such a nap she decided to stood on her hooves and immediately catch some glances from ponies; there was two fillies which make their way to Ponyville, when Trixie looked on their eyes, she was mesmerized, the whole moon reflected in their own eyes, but wasn’t that thing that shocked her – After such a nap she decided to st |
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In their eyes she saw herself, helself from the past, when just boasted at their ponies, and acting selfishly in front of them; she finally understood how much pain she bring into them, and how much they tried to forget it, but they couldn’t do that, they just…can’t! In their eyes she saw herself, he |
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After such realization Trixie drowned into herself, her own thoughts just grabbed her with a death grip, and deep deep in her heart she encountered her – After such a realization, Trixie drowned into herself, her own thoughts |
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Trixie Luramoon, it was reflection, shattered into dozens of pieces but still in a whole. Trixie Luramoon |
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She saw her every moment, every time when she was selfish, and every that moment was with whisper – it that life a really want? She saw her every moment, every time when she was selfish, and every |
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Whisper became a yelling, and Trixie coundn’t stop it, until she said there words - I accept this; for a moment all the yelling stopped – Whispering became |
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I accept my past, and accept all my poor acts, all what I did, and I didn’t have intentions to forget it, I realized that my past wasn’t the curse, it was a blessing; my past like a beacon, the lights that path that I wanted to be mine, and past couldn’t interfere into it! I accept my past, and |
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I’m doing my choices now, and I’m who can forge my future. I’m doing |
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I wouldn’t able to erase my past, but I had a chance to make this path to guide me! I |
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Guide into future, which more brighter that my past!
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In that moment, thin
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