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Journey to the Peach Garden (1)

Hello everyone! Today, I tried to translate a classical Chinese article called "Journey to the Peach Garden". The original text is in the notes. I will translate the original text in three parts.

During the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty. A man who lived in Wuling County made a living by fishing. One day, he rowed along the brook, but he forgot how far he had gone. Suddenly, he found a peach blossom forest. The forest grew on both sides of the brook, and was hundreds of feet long. But there wasn't any other kinds of trees.The grass was nice and fresh, and the falling flowers were everywhere. The fisherman was surprised at this forest. He rowed along again and wanted to find the end of this forest.

The peach blossom forest was end at the source of the brook. The fisherman also saw a mountain. There was a small hole on it. Some indistinct light was in it. So he left his boat and went in to the hole. The tunnel was very narrow first, only one person could get through. He walked a few steps again, the tunnel suddenly became bright and open. The land there was flat and wide. There house were all in order. And there were also some sceneries like rich soils, beautiful lakes, mulberry trees and banboos. The paths interwove in the field. Crows and barks could hear everywhere. In the fieid, people were busying in cultivating. Men and women's wearing in this place were the same as what people wore outside. The olds and the children were all peaceful and happy.


桃花源记(节选)
【作者】陶渊明 【朝代】东晋
晋太元中,武陵人捕鱼为业。缘溪行,忘路之远近。忽逢桃花林,夹岸数百步,中无杂树,芳草鲜美,落英缤纷。渔人甚异之,复前行,欲穷其林。
林尽水源,便得一山,山有小口,仿佛若有光。便舍船,从口入。初极狭,才通人。复行数十步,豁然开朗。土地平旷,屋舍俨然,有良田、美池、桑竹之属。阡陌交通,鸡犬相闻。其中往来种作,男女衣着,悉如外人。黄发垂髫,并怡然自乐。

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Journey to the Peach Garden (1)

Hello, everyone!

Today, I have tried to translate a classical Chinese articfolktale called "Journey to the Peach Garden"."

The original textstory is in the notes.

I will translate the original text into three parts.

During the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty.

This is an incomplete sentence so I added it to the next line.

ADuring the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, a man who lived in Wuling County made a living by fishing.

or,

During the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, a man who lived in Wuling County made a living through fishing.

One day, he rowed along the brook, but he forgot how far he had gone.

or,

One day, he rowed along the river, but lost track of how far he had gone.

Suddenly, he found a peach blossom forest.

The forest grew on both sides of the brook, and was hundreds of feet long.

or,

The forest grew on both sides of the river and was hundreds of feet long.

But there waseren't any other kinds of trees. The grass was nice and fresh, and the falling flowers were everywhere.

or,

But there weren't any other kinds of trees. The grass was nice and fresh and flower petals were falling everywhere.

The fisherman was surprised at this forest.

or,

The fisherman was surprised with this forest.

He rowed along again andbecause he wanted to find the end of this forest.

The peach blossom forest was ended at the source of the brookriver.

The fisherman also saw a mountain.

There was a small holcave oin it.

Some indistinct light wascould be seen in it.

So he left his boat and went in to the holcave.

The tunnel was very narrow at first, o. Only one person could get through at a time.

or,

The tunnel was very narrow at first: only one person could get through at a time.

He walked a few steps again,further and the tunnel suddenly became bright and open.

The land there was flat and wide.

There houses there were all in order.

And there were also some sceneries like rRich soils, beautiful lakes, mulberry trees and banmboos could also be seen.

The paths interwove in the field.

Crowsing and barksing could be heard everywhere.

In the fieild, people were busying in cultivating.

or,

In the field, people were busy farming.

MThe clothing men and women's wearing wore in this place were the same as what people wore on the outside.

The oelds and theerly and children were all peaceful and happy.

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Journey to the Peach Garden (1)


Journey to the Peach Garden (1)

Hello everyone!


Hello, everyone!

Today, I tried to translate a classical Chinese article called "Journey to the Peach Garden".


Today, I have tried to translate a classical Chinese articfolktale called "Journey to the Peach Garden"."

The original text is in the notes.


The original textstory is in the notes.

I will translate the original text in three parts.


I will translate the original text into three parts.

During the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty.


During the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty.

This is an incomplete sentence so I added it to the next line.

A man who lived in Wuling County made a living by fishing.


ADuring the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, a man who lived in Wuling County made a living by fishing.

or, During the Taiyuan period of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, a man who lived in Wuling County made a living through fishing.

One day, he rowed along the brook, but he forgot how far he had gone.


One day, he rowed along the brook, but he forgot how far he had gone.

or, One day, he rowed along the river, but lost track of how far he had gone.

Suddenly, he found a peach blossom forest.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The forest grew on both sides of the brook, and was hundreds of feet long.


The forest grew on both sides of the brook, and was hundreds of feet long.

or, The forest grew on both sides of the river and was hundreds of feet long.

But there wasn't any other kinds of trees.The grass was nice and fresh, and the falling flowers were everywhere.


But there waseren't any other kinds of trees. The grass was nice and fresh, and the falling flowers were everywhere.

or, But there weren't any other kinds of trees. The grass was nice and fresh and flower petals were falling everywhere.

The fisherman was surprised at this forest.


The fisherman was surprised at this forest.

or, The fisherman was surprised with this forest.

He rowed along again and wanted to find the end of this forest.


He rowed along again andbecause he wanted to find the end of this forest.

The peach blossom forest was end at the source of the brook.


The peach blossom forest was ended at the source of the brookriver.

The fisherman also saw a mountain.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There was a small hole on it.


There was a small holcave oin it.

Some indistinct light was in it.


Some indistinct light wascould be seen in it.

So he left his boat and went in to the hole.


So he left his boat and went in to the holcave.

The tunnel was very narrow first, only one person could get through.


The tunnel was very narrow at first, o. Only one person could get through at a time.

or, The tunnel was very narrow at first: only one person could get through at a time.

He walked a few steps again, the tunnel suddenly became bright and open.


He walked a few steps again,further and the tunnel suddenly became bright and open.

The land there was flat and wide.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There house were all in order.


There houses there were all in order.

And there were also some sceneries like rich soils, beautiful lakes, mulberry trees and banboos.


And there were also some sceneries like rRich soils, beautiful lakes, mulberry trees and banmboos could also be seen.

The paths interwove in the field.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Crows and barks could hear everywhere.


Crowsing and barksing could be heard everywhere.

In the fieid, people were busying in cultivating.


In the fieild, people were busying in cultivating.

or, In the field, people were busy farming.

Men and women's wearing in this place were the same as what people wore outside.


MThe clothing men and women's wearing wore in this place were the same as what people wore on the outside.

The olds and the children were all peaceful and happy.


The oelds and theerly and children were all peaceful and happy.

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