Jan. 13, 2025
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My friend and I went to visit a popular beach. We borrowed bikes from our brothers to get there because we didn’t have enough money to cover this trip, but we were determined to go at all costs. It took us two hours to get there, but it was worth it because we had a good time.
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My friend and I went to visit a popular beach.
We borrowed bikes from our brothers ' (to get there) because we didn’t have enough money to cover for this trip, but we were determined to go at all costs.
Since it's clear that you're using the bikes for the trip (since you explain that you don't have enough money to go via car or bus) you don't have to include to get there in the sentence. It feels a little redundant.
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Glad you had a fun time at the beach! Your English is great as well! Keep up the good work!
Journey
We borrowed bikes from our brothers’ bikes to get there because we didn’t have enough money to cover this trip, but we were determined to go at all costs.
“To cover this trip” usually means everything (gas, flight, hotel, food, etc) together for a big trip. I assume you meant “to cover the bus fare” or “to pay for a taxi”?
It took us two hours to get there, but it was worth it because we had a good time.
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My friend and I went to visit a popular beach. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We borrowed bikes from our brothers to get there because we didn’t have enough money to cover this trip, but we were determined to go at all costs. We borrowed “To cover this trip” usually means everything (gas, flight, hotel, food, etc) together for a big trip. I assume you meant “to cover the bus fare” or “to pay for a taxi”? We borrowed bikes from our brothers Since it's clear that you're using the bikes for the trip (since you explain that you don't have enough money to go via car or bus) you don't have to include to get there in the sentence. It feels a little redundant. |
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It took us two hours to get there, but it was worth it because we had a good time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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