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Jonas

Feb. 20, 2022

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Journal on weekends

This weekend is over. Tomorrow will be the working day. Told be truth, the favorite day of the weekend is Saturday. The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun. I always feel like the weekend is quite short. I guess everyone feels like the same way. I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one day work. All right, somehow I will take on the world tomorrow morning. By the way, I'm not an early bird. Good night!

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Toldruth be truth, old, the favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun.

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

I think Friday it's alsos not a bad in aday during the week, because all you need to do is to finish one more day work.

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Jonas

Feb. 21, 2022

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I am so grateful for your help!😀

Journal on weekendsWeekend Journal

"Weekend Journal" Would be more natural. But Journal on weekends is ok

This weekend is over.

Tomorrow will be theis a working day.

"Tomorrow is a working day" sounds very natural. The usage of "will be the" in your original sentence makes it come off like something drastic will occur.

Told b tell the truth, themy favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

You could also put "my favorite day of the week", but saying "my favorite day of the weekend" is not wrong.

The reason is that you still have one anothermore day to have fun.

saying "another" after "one" does not come off as natural, and can be a bit repetitive.

I always feel like the weekend is quite short.

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

if you want to use "like", you should say "I guess everyone feels like that." The context will be picked up from the previous sentence.

I think Friday it's also not a bad day in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one day of work.

Personally, I would have written "I think Friday is also not too bad during the week, because all you need to do is finish one more day of work." But what you wrote is very good as well!

All right, somehow I will take on the world tomorrow morning.

By the way, I'm not an early bird.

Good night!

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Good entry! Your english flows very well! Keep practicing ^^

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Jonas

Feb. 21, 2022

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I am so grateful for your help!😀

Journal on weekends

'My Weekend Journal'

Tomorrow will be another working day.

Told be truth, theruth be told/To tell the truth/To be honest, my favourite day of the weekend is Saturday.

favorite = USA
favourite = UK

The reason is thatIt's because you still have one anothermore day to have fun.

'It's because you still have another day to have fun.'

I always feel like the weekend is quite short.

'I always feel like the weekend is too short.'

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

'I guess everyone feels that way.'

I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one daymore day of work.

'I also like Fridays'
'Fridays aren't bad either'

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Well done :) I added some alternatives too.

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Jonas

Feb. 21, 2022

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I am so grateful for your help!😀

Tomorrow will be thea working day.

"The" is used for specific nouns, "a" is used for non-specific nouns (similar to "一个" in Chinese).

Told be truth, theruth be told, my favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

You are talking about your favorite day, so use "my" instead of "the."

The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun.

Use "have another" or "have one other."

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one daymore day of work.

You can also add something like "before the weekend" at the end of the sentence.

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Great job!

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Jonas

Feb. 21, 2022

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I am so grateful for your help!😀

Journal on weekends

This weekend is over.

Tomorrow will be thea working day.

Told be truth, theruth be told, my favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun.

I always feel like the weekend is quitetoo short.

"quite short" is okay, but "too short" works better here

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one day work.

What do you mean exactly, here? I'm unsure

All right, somehow I will take on the world tomorrow morning.

By the way, I'm not an early bird.

Good night!

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Good luck! :)

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Jonas

Feb. 21, 2022

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epistemophile

Feb. 22, 2022

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Journal on weekends


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Journal on weekends

'My Weekend Journal'

Journal on weekendsWeekend Journal

"Weekend Journal" Would be more natural. But Journal on weekends is ok

This weekend is over.


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Tomorrow will be the working day.


Tomorrow will be thea working day.

Tomorrow will be thea working day.

"The" is used for specific nouns, "a" is used for non-specific nouns (similar to "一个" in Chinese).

Tomorrow will be another working day.

Tomorrow will be theis a working day.

"Tomorrow is a working day" sounds very natural. The usage of "will be the" in your original sentence makes it come off like something drastic will occur.

Told be truth, the favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.


Told be truth, theruth be told, my favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

Told be truth, theruth be told, my favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

You are talking about your favorite day, so use "my" instead of "the."

Told be truth, theruth be told/To tell the truth/To be honest, my favourite day of the weekend is Saturday.

favorite = USA favourite = UK

Told b tell the truth, themy favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

You could also put "my favorite day of the week", but saying "my favorite day of the weekend" is not wrong.

Toldruth be truth, old, the favorite day of the weekend is Saturday.

The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun.


The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun.

The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun.

Use "have another" or "have one other."

The reason is thatIt's because you still have one anothermore day to have fun.

'It's because you still have another day to have fun.'

The reason is that you still have one anothermore day to have fun.

saying "another" after "one" does not come off as natural, and can be a bit repetitive.

The reason is that you still have one another day to have fun.

I always feel like the weekend is quite short.


I always feel like the weekend is quitetoo short.

"quite short" is okay, but "too short" works better here

I always feel like the weekend is quite short.

'I always feel like the weekend is too short.'

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I guess everyone feels like the same way.


I guess everyone feels like the same way.

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

'I guess everyone feels that way.'

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

if you want to use "like", you should say "I guess everyone feels like that." The context will be picked up from the previous sentence.

I guess everyone feels like the same way.

I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one day work.


I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one day work.

What do you mean exactly, here? I'm unsure

I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one daymore day of work.

You can also add something like "before the weekend" at the end of the sentence.

I think Friday it's also not bad in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one daymore day of work.

'I also like Fridays' 'Fridays aren't bad either'

I think Friday it's also not a bad day in a week, because all you need to do is to finish one day of work.

Personally, I would have written "I think Friday is also not too bad during the week, because all you need to do is finish one more day of work." But what you wrote is very good as well!

I think Friday it's alsos not a bad in aday during the week, because all you need to do is to finish one more day work.

All right, somehow I will take on the world tomorrow morning.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By the way, I'm not an early bird.


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Good night!


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