Oct. 8, 2020
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I love the blue sky with white clouds and it is really fantastic. You can see this fabulous scenery only in autumn. At this moment, I think of a Chinese poem “晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄” although I am not a poet and I cannot write poems, I like reading poems. When I see a nice poem, I appreciate it so much. I don’t know if I am happy, maybe kind of. A little thing in life sometimes always makes me very grateful. Yes, for me life is always cool. Over all, I think I am a happy person even though I can also feel bored at times, but I can pull myself out soon. Haha, it’s not bad.
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I love the blue sky with white clouds and, because it is really fantastic.
You have two complete sentences, so they should be separated with either a comma or a period.
You can see this fabulous scenery only in autumn.
At this moment, I think'm reminded of athe Chinese poem “晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄” a. Although I am not a poet and I cannot write poemstry, I like reading poems.
When I see a nice poem, I appreciate it so much.
I don’t know if I am happy, maybe kind of.
AOftentimes, it is the little things in life sometimes alwaysthat makes me very grateful.
Yes, for me life is always cool.
Over all, I think I am a happy person, even though I can also feel bored at times, but I can pull myself out sooneasily.
Haha, it’s not bad.
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The simple things in life are often the sweetest^^ I also enjoy living a simple life.
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I love the blue sky with white clouds and it is really fantastic. I love the blue sky with white clouds You have two complete sentences, so they should be separated with either a comma or a period. |
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You can see this fabulous scenery only in autumn. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At this moment, I think of a Chinese poem “晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄” although I am not a poet and I cannot write poems, I like reading poems. At this moment, I |
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When I see a nice poem, I appreciate it so much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don’t know if I am happy, maybe kind of. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A little thing in life sometimes always makes me very grateful.
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Yes, for me life is always cool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Over all, I think I am a happy person even though I can also feel bored at times, but I can pull myself out soon. Over |
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Haha, it’s not bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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