March 7, 2021
Journal
Today was Sunday, and the weather was beautiful. I could feel that Spring has finally come.
Today, I went to Itaewon to meet my college friend, J. Itaewon is a district in Korea where many foreigners reside. Because of the population that frequent the area, it has a unique, hip atmosphere to it. If you walk around the streets in Itaewon, you soon find yourself surrounded by artsy-looking people in very creative and fashionable garments. It’s quite a different experience from taking a stroll in other populated places, like Gangnam or Hongdae.
My friend and I sat in a cafe, and each engaged in our work separately for several hours. Then we took out some salad from a vegan restaurant.
It is kind of far from where I live, but I really like this area. Visiting the places there is always refreshing.
I should come again soon, to grab some Kebab next time^^
Journal
Today was Sunday, and the weather was beautiful.
It sounds better like this but you can still add the and if you wanted
I could feel that Spring hasd finally come.
Today, I went to Itaewon to meet my college friend, J. Itaewon is a district in Korea where many foreigners residestay.
It would sound repetitive to start the sentence with today again
Because of the large population that frequentin theat area, it has a unique, and hip atmosphere to it.
If you walk around the streets in Itaewon, you will soon find yourself surrounded by artsy-looking people in very creative and fashionable garmentclothes.
It’s quite a different experience from taking a stroll in other populated places, like Gangnam or Hongdae.
My friend and I sat in a cafe, and each engaged in our work separately for several hours.
Then we took ougot some salad from a vegan restaurant.
It is kind of far from where I live, but I really like this area.
Visiting the places there is always refreshing.
I should come again soon, to grab some Kebab next time^^
Journal
Today was Sunday, and the weather was beautiful.
I could feel that Spring has finally come.
Today, I went to Itaewon to meet my college friend, J. Itaewon is a district in Korea where many foreigners reside.
Because of the population that frequent the area, it has a unique, hip atmosphere to it.
If you walk around the streets in Itaewon, you soon find yourself surrounded by artsy-looking people in very creative and fashionable garments.
It’s quite a different experience from taking a stroll in other populated places, like Gangnam or Hongdae.
My friend and I sat in a cafe, and each engaged in our work separately for several hours.
Then we took ougot some salad from a vegan restaurant.
English is strange here: you can get take-out or take-away food, but you generally do not take it out or take it away!
My suggestion is a little ambiguous - if you want to emphasise that you didn't eat at the restaurant, you might say "we got take-out salad", or "we got some salad to take away" or "to go". But if you just said "we got food from the restaurant", I think I would assume it was takeaway. If you'd eaten there you would say "we ate *at* the restaurant", so "got food from" definitely suggests that you didn't eat there.
It is kind of far from where I live, but I really like this area.
Visiting the places there is always refreshing.
I should come again soon, to grab some Kebab next time^^
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March 8, 2021
Wow, thank you for your detailed explanation. I would have never known,,,Thank you...: ) Have a great day...! : )
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Today, I went to Itaewon to meet my college friend, J. Itaewon is a district in Korea where many foreigners reside. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Because of the population that frequent the area, it has a unique, hip atmosphere. |
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If you look around the street in Itaewon, you find yourself surrounded by people in very creative and fashionable clothes. |
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It’s quite unlike other places in Seoul, like Gangbam or Hongdae. |
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My friend and I sat in a cafe and engaged in our work separately for several hours. |
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Then we took out some salad from a vegan restaurant. Then we English is strange here: you can get take-out or take-away food, but you generally do not take it out or take it away! My suggestion is a little ambiguous - if you want to emphasise that you didn't eat at the restaurant, you might say "we got take-out salad", or "we got some salad to take away" or "to go". But if you just said "we got food from the restaurant", I think I would assume it was takeaway. If you'd eaten there you would say "we ate *at* the restaurant", so "got food from" definitely suggests that you didn't eat there. Then we |
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If you walk around the streets in Itaewon, you soon find yourself surrounded by artsy-looking people in very creative and fashionable clothes. |
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It’s quite unlike other places in Seoul, like Gangnam or Hongdae. |
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My friend and I sat in a cafe, and each engaged in our work separately for several hours. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s quite a different experience from walking in other places, like Gangnam or Hongdae. |
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