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steventart

Oct. 10, 2020

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I love listening to music. It can not only soothe my entangled nerves but also give me strength when faced with adversity. I am not saying music is a panacea of every problems, but I do think it's therapeutic. Today I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning. Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and lay in my bed, starting to listen to some wholesome music. Normally I would just play some pop songs but at that very moment it occurred to me that I should go with instrumentals. Feeling relaxed, I nodded off and dreamed of my space travel once again.

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It can not only soothe my entangled nerves but also give me strength when faced with adversity.

Originally was correct, but I felt like this weird was a bit excessive (usually people just stick with "soothes my nerves")

I am not saying music is a panacea of everyfor all problems, but I do think it's therapeutic.

Todayhis morning I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning.

Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and layied down in my bed, starting to listen to some wholesome music.

Normally I would just play some pop songs, but at that very moment it occurred to me that I should go with instrumentals.

Feeling relaxed, I nodded off and dreamed of my space travel once again.

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I love listening to music.

It can not only soothes my entangled nerves but also gives me strength when faced with adversity.

Your sentence makes sense but this is a more natural way to say it

I am not saying music is a panacea of everyall problems, but I do think it's therapeutic.

Todayhis morning I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning.

Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and, layid in my bed, and startinged to listen to some wholesome music.

Normally I would just play some pop songs but at that very moment it occurred to me that I should go with instrumentals.

Feeling relaxed, I nodded off and dreamed of my space travel once again.

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Great work! Music really is so special.

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steventart

Oct. 11, 2020

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Thank you! Yeh,I love relaxing music!

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I love listening to music.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It can not only soothe my entangled nerves but also give me strength when faced with adversity.


It can not only soothes my entangled nerves but also gives me strength when faced with adversity.

Your sentence makes sense but this is a more natural way to say it

It can not only soothe my entangled nerves but also give me strength when faced with adversity.

Originally was correct, but I felt like this weird was a bit excessive (usually people just stick with "soothes my nerves")

I am not saying music is a panacea of every problems, but I do think it's therapeutic.


I am not saying music is a panacea of everyall problems, but I do think it's therapeutic.

I am not saying music is a panacea of everyfor all problems, but I do think it's therapeutic.

Today I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning.


Todayhis morning I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning.

Todayhis morning I felt a bit down in the dumps in the morning.

Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and lay in my bed, starting to listen to some wholesome music.


Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and, layid in my bed, and startinged to listen to some wholesome music.

Not knowing what I had to do, I went to my bedroom and layied down in my bed, starting to listen to some wholesome music.

Normally I would just play some pop songs but at that very moment it occurred to me that I should go with instrumentals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Normally I would just play some pop songs, but at that very moment it occurred to me that I should go with instrumentals.

Feeling relaxed, I nodded off and dreamed of my space travel once again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Feeling relaxed, I nodded off and dreamed of my space travel once again.

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