Oct. 8, 2020
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Oftentimes, I feel I am a person who can go through the world just with a bicycle, a phone, and two pieces of clothes. A bicycle can take you everywhere, and a phone can deal with everything you need. Pay, guide, things like that. Isn't that right? There are too many unnecessary things in people's lives, and it gives them unnecessary pressure and loads. But so many people still seem unaware of the truth and still go straight to the wrong ways. Life really doesn't need a lot, all we need is just eating and wearing. Less is healthy, less is happy, less is more.
Oftentimes, I feel I am a person who can go through the world just with a bicycle, a phone, and two pieces of clothes.
Alternatively: Oftentimes, I feel like all I need in life is just a bicycle, a phone, and two pieces of clothes.
A bicycle can take you everywhere, and a phone can help you deal with everything you need.
Alternatively, can use "anywhere" and "anything" instead.
Pay, guide, things like thatFor example, a phone can be used to make payments or for GPS navigations.
Isn't that right?
But so many people still seem unaware of the truth and still go straight to the wrong ways.
I don't quite understand the second half of the sentence.
Life really doesn't need a lot, all we need is just eating and wearfood and clothing.
Oct. 8, 2020
Thank you for your corrections and explanations. You have made a great progress in your Chinese.
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Oftentimes, I feel I am a person who can go through the world just with a bicycle, a phone, and two pieces of clothes. Oftentimes, I feel I am a person who can go through the world just with a bicycle, a phone, and two pieces of clothes. Alternatively: Oftentimes, I feel like all I need in life is just a bicycle, a phone, and two pieces of clothes. |
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A bicycle can take you everywhere, and a phone can deal with everything you need. A bicycle can take you everywhere, and a phone can help you deal with everything you need. Alternatively, can use "anywhere" and "anything" instead. |
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Pay, guide, things like that.
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Isn't that right? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are too many unnecessary things in people's lives, and it gives them unnecessary pressure and loads. |
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But so many people still seem unaware of the truth and still go straight to the wrong ways. But so many people still seem unaware of the truth I don't quite understand the second half of the sentence. |
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Life really doesn't need a lot, all we need is just eating and wearing. Life really doesn't need a lot, all we need is just |
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Less is healthy, less is happy, less is more. |
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