Feb. 8, 2024
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Now I am on a train to Hainan island and the train is a normal speed train, not a high speed train.
This is the first time I have taken a normal speed train in many years. In the last ten years, high speed trains have been developed rapidly, so high speed trains are more popular than ordinary trains.
High speed trains only have one shot coming-its price is a little expensive. For instance, taking a normal train from Fuyang to Shanghai only takes 93 RMB, while a high speed train takes around 320 RMB. However, a high speed train is three times faster than an ordinary train.
The trip I am taking is from Fuyang to Haikou and it will take 29 hours. I departed at 11 am from Fuyang train station and I will be arriving at Haikou train station by 5:30 pm tomorrow afternoon.
I've been to Hainan island several times, but I always took a plane and the plane ticket was around 700 RMB. The trip by plane is only 2 and a half hours.
This time I am going to Hainan almost during the traditional Chinese new year and many people go to Hainan at the same time, so plane tickets are going up soon. I checked the plane ticket last night and it was around 2000 RMB for a single ride.
My son's family also went to Hainan this morning. My sister-in-law and her husband were with my son's family. They drove a car.
We are supposed to arrive at Haikou at almost the same time-tomorrow afternoon. My parents-in-law, my wife and one of my nephews are waiting for us there. We have two apartments in Hakou. A rented one and one I just bought a few days ago.
Now I am on a train to Hainan island and the train is a normal speed train, not a high speed train.
I don't think what you've written is wrong but I would say: Now I am on a train to Hainan island and the train is just an ordinary train, not a high speed train.
This is the first time I have taken a normal speed train in many years.
I would say : This is the first time I have taken an ordinary train in many years.
In the last ten years, high speed trains have been developed rapidly, so high speed trains are more popular than ordinary trains.
High speed trains only have one shot coming-drawback - its price is a little expensive.
For instance, taking a normal train from Fuyang to Shanghai only takecosts 93 RMB, while a high speed train takecosts around 320 RMB.
However, a high speed train is three times faster than an ordinary train.
I departed at 11 am from Fuyang train station and I will be arriving at Haikou train station by 5:30 pm tomorrow afternoon.
I've been to Hainan island several times, but I always took a plane and the plane ticket was around 700 RMB.
The trip by plane is only 2 and a half hours.
This time I am going to Hainan almost duringclose to the traditional Chinese new year and many people go to Hainan at the same time, so plane tickets prices are going to go/ will go up soon.
"Soon" implies the future that's why I think you need either "going to" or '"will's.
I checked the plane ticket prices between Fuyang and Haikou last night and it was around 2000 RMB for a single rideone-way ticket.
My son's family also went to Hainan this morning.
My sister-in-law and her husband were with my son's family.
They drove a carthere.
We are supposed to arrive at Haikou at almost the same time-tomorrow afternoon.
My parents-in-law, my wife and one of my nephews are waiting for us there.
We have two apartments in Haikou.
A rented one and one I just bought a few days ago.
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I would like to visit Hainan and eat coconut and seafood! Enjoy you time there! 新年快乐🐉
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Now I am on a train to Hainan island and the train is a normal speed train, not a high speed train.
This is the first time I have taken a normal speed train in many years.
In the last ten years, high speed trains have been developed rapidly, so high speed trains are more popular than ordinary trains.
High speed trains only have one shot comingtop-its price is a little expensive.
For instance, taking a normal train from Fuyang to Shanghai only takes 93 RMB, while a high speed train takes around 320 RMB.
However, a high speed train is three times faster than an ordinary train.
The trip I am taking is from Fuyang to Haikou and it will take 29 hours.
I departed at 11 am from Fuyang train station and I will be arriving at Haikou train station by 5:30 pm tomorrow afternoon.
I've been to Hainan island several times, but I always took a plane and the plane ticket was around 700 RMB.
The trip by plane is only 2 and a half hours.
This time I am going to Hainan almost during the traditional Chinese new year and many people go to Hainan at the same time, so plane ticket prices are going up soon.
I checked the plane ticket last night and it was around 2000 RMB for a single ride.
My son's family also went to Hainan this morning.
My sister-in-law and her husband were with my son's family.
They drove a car.
We are supposed to arrive at Haikou at almost the same time- tomorrow afternoon.
My parents-in-law, my wife and one of my nephews are waiting for us there.
We have two apartments in Hakou, a rented one and one I just bought a few days ago.
Feb. 8, 2024
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