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In my memory, no matter if we watch a movie, read a story or listen to a story told by others, it is always in the same plot: a long time ago, there was a rich landlord, he had plenty of land and so much money. In short, he was the richest and the strongest man in that area. Then he must have a son and his son was a fool, a deadly fool. Also, there must be a farmer in the same area and he was very poor, even if he didn't have enough food or clothing to live, but he must have a son and his son was very smart and brave. So a good story began. In every battle between the rich and the poor, the poor was always the winner and the rich were always the loser. In every battle, the poor son behaved cleverly and bravely, but the rich son always behaved stupidly. Now we think about it seriously. That is true, people growing up in a rich family usually don't strive for advancement, and people growing up in a poor family usually work hard to change their situation. So if you think you are a person who doesn't want to work hard, it doesn't matter because your offspring must be getting clever, stronger and richer.

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In my memory, no matter if wewhether it is from watching a movie, read a storying a book or listening to a story told by others, i, the plot is always in the same plot: a long time ago, there was- a rich landlord, he had with plenty of land and so much money.

In short, he wasHe would be the richest and the strongest man in thate area.

Then hHe mustually haves a son and his son was a fool, a deadlywho is a fool.

Also,Then there must be a farmer in the same area and he was very poor, even if he's usually involves a poor farmer who didn't have enough food to eat or clothinges to livewear, but he mustwho haved a son and his son was very smart and bravebrave and intelligent son.

So a good story began.That is how the story usually begins.

In every battstruggle between the rich and the poor, the poor was always the winners and the rich were always the losers.

In every battle, the poor sonFurthermore, the son of the poor man would behaved cleverly and bravely, but the rich son always behaved stupidconversely, the son of the rich man would behave foolishly.

Now weIf we stop and think about it seriously, this outcome is generally true.

That is true, pPeople growing up in a rich familyies usually don't need to strive for advancement, andwhile people growing up in a poor family usuallyies have to work hard to changimprove their situation.circumstances.

So if you think you are a person who doesn't want to work hard, it doesn't matter because your offspring must be getting clever, stronger and richer.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say here. I hate to make the wrong guess.

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In my memory, no matter if we watch a movie, read a story or listen to a story told by others, it is always in the same plot: a long time ago, there was a rich landlord, he had plenty of land and so muchlots of money.

If you are just saying someone has money, use "lots of money"/"tons of money", e.g. "he has lots of money"

If you use "so much" we expect the next part of the sentence to explain what makes it "so much" money, e.g. "he has so much money he can buy anything he wants", "she has so much money she never has to work again"

In short, he was the richest and the strongest man in that area.

Then, he must have a son and his son wasmust be a fool, a deadly fool.

Also, there must be a farmer in the same area and he wawho is very poor,. And even if he didoesn't have enough food or clothing to live, but he must have a son and his son wasmust be very smart and brave.

So a good story beganins.

In every battle between the rich and the poor, the poor wasere always the winner and the rich were always the loser.

In every battle, the poor son behaveds cleverly and bravely, but and the rich son always behaveds stupidly.

NBut now we think about it seriously.

ThaIt is true, that people growing up in a rich family usually don't strive for advancement, and people growing up in a poor family usually work hard to change their situation.

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Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.

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In my memory, no matter if we watch a movie, read a story or listen to a story told by others, it is always in the same plot: a long time ago, there was a rich landlord, he had plenty of land and so much money.


In my memory, no matter if we watch a movie, read a story or listen to a story told by others, it is always in the same plot: a long time ago, there was a rich landlord, he had plenty of land and so muchlots of money.

If you are just saying someone has money, use "lots of money"/"tons of money", e.g. "he has lots of money" If you use "so much" we expect the next part of the sentence to explain what makes it "so much" money, e.g. "he has so much money he can buy anything he wants", "she has so much money she never has to work again"

In my memory, no matter if wewhether it is from watching a movie, read a storying a book or listening to a story told by others, i, the plot is always in the same plot: a long time ago, there was- a rich landlord, he had with plenty of land and so much money.

In short, he was the richest and the strongest man in that area.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In short, he wasHe would be the richest and the strongest man in thate area.

Then he must have a son and his son was a fool, a deadly fool.


Then, he must have a son and his son wasmust be a fool, a deadly fool.

Then hHe mustually haves a son and his son was a fool, a deadlywho is a fool.

Also, there must be a farmer in the same area and he was very poor, even if he didn't have enough food or clothing to live, but he must have a son and his son was very smart and brave.


Also, there must be a farmer in the same area and he wawho is very poor,. And even if he didoesn't have enough food or clothing to live, but he must have a son and his son wasmust be very smart and brave.

Also,Then there must be a farmer in the same area and he was very poor, even if he's usually involves a poor farmer who didn't have enough food to eat or clothinges to livewear, but he mustwho haved a son and his son was very smart and bravebrave and intelligent son.

So a good story began.


So a good story beganins.

So a good story began.That is how the story usually begins.

In every battle between the rich and the poor, the poor was always the winner and the rich were always the loser.


In every battle between the rich and the poor, the poor wasere always the winner and the rich were always the loser.

In every battstruggle between the rich and the poor, the poor was always the winners and the rich were always the losers.

In every battle, the poor son behaved cleverly and bravely, but the rich son always behaved stupidly.


In every battle, the poor son behaveds cleverly and bravely, but and the rich son always behaveds stupidly.

In every battle, the poor sonFurthermore, the son of the poor man would behaved cleverly and bravely, but the rich son always behaved stupidconversely, the son of the rich man would behave foolishly.

Now we think about it seriously.


NBut now we think about it seriously.

Now weIf we stop and think about it seriously, this outcome is generally true.

That is true, people growing up in a rich family usually don't strive for advancement, and people growing up in a poor family usually work hard to change their situation.


ThaIt is true, that people growing up in a rich family usually don't strive for advancement, and people growing up in a poor family usually work hard to change their situation.

That is true, pPeople growing up in a rich familyies usually don't need to strive for advancement, andwhile people growing up in a poor family usuallyies have to work hard to changimprove their situation.circumstances.

So if you think you are a person who doesn't want to work hard, it doesn't matter because your offspring must be getting clever, stronger and richer.


So if you think you are a person who doesn't want to work hard, it doesn't matter because your offspring must be getting clever, stronger and richer.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say here. I hate to make the wrong guess.

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