Oct. 8, 2020
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Occasionally, I will write some ancient poetry to enjoy myself, but I know I don’t have a high level of writing them. It is just for fun. As far as I know, I think two people are good at writing ancient poetry. One is my colleague, and I only read two poems by him. Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also only read two or three poems of him. I don’t know how to describe how good their poems are. However, I am not a poetry critic, but the feelings told me, which are called talent. So I wrote the words “Only after working hard do you know what talent is. ” l feel that no matter how I try my best, I will not write as well as they do. If some people are better at some fields than me, I always admit it. Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.
Occasionally, I will write some ancient poetryms to enjoyamuse myself, but I know I don’t have a high level of writing them.even though I know my writing level for ancient poetry is not high enough.
You do not ever want to say "to enjoy myself", because in vernacular American English, that means something sexual.
It is just for fun.
As far as I know, I think two peopleonly have two acquaintances who are good at writing ancient poetry.
One is my colleague, and I only read two poems by himread only two of his poems.
Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also have only read two or three poems of himof his poems.
I don’t know how to describe how good their poems arecritic poetry, but .....
Combining this sentence with the next.
However, I am not a poetry critic, but the feelings told me, which are called.... I know how poems make me feel and I recognize when a poet has talent.
So I wrote the words “Only after having workinged hard docan you knowappreciate what talent is."
” l feel that no matter how hard I try my best, I will not ever write as well as they do.
Since this sentence does not sound like a quotation anymore, I have removed the quotes.
If someWhen people are better at somecertain fields than me, I alwaysI am, I will always readily admit it.
Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.
I don't understand what you mean by "don't cheat others?" Perhaps cheating is not what you mean to say??
Oct. 8, 2020
Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.
I mean that is a rule for me as a person. Don’t cheat other people and also don’t cheat yourself. Someone is better than you and you don’t admit the fact so you are cheating your self. You are very stupid. I don’t know if I made myself clear.
Oct. 8, 2020
Thank you for your corrections.
Oct. 8, 2020
I almost feel that based on what you wrote regarding other people's talent, what you really meant to say is don't envy other people, rather than don't cheat other people. Cheating generally means that you do something illegal or wrong to gain success. When you cheat other people, it is more like a card game and you swapped a jack for an ace. Does that make sense?
Oct. 8, 2020
Yes. It makes sense. Because I am still at a low English level, I often can’t express my words accurately.
Oct. 8, 2020
There is a good app called "Pleco" that translates from Chinese to English and vice versa. My son uses it and really liked it.
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Occasionally, I will write somrite ancient poetry to enjoy myself, but I know I don’t have a high level of writing them'm not very good at it.
It is just for fun.
As far as I know, I thinkI know two people that are good at writing ancient poetry.
One is my colleague, and I have only read two poems by him.
Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I have also only read two or three poems of hims.
I don’t know how to describe how good their poems are.
However, I am not a poetry critic, but theI feelings told me, which are called that they are talented.
So I wrote the wordstold myself: “Only after working hard do you know what talent is."
” l feel that no matter how hard I try my best, I will notever write as well as they do."
If some people are better at some fields than me, I always admit it.
Don’t cheat others, but also don’t deceive yourself.
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Good work!
Oct. 8, 2020
Thank you for your corrections. Thank you very much.
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As far as I know, I think two people are good at writing ancient poetry.
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Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also only read two or three poems of him. Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I have also only read two or three poems of hi Another is a young man from my former work unit, and I also have only read two or three |
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However, I am not a poetry critic, but the feelings told me, which are called talent.
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” l feel that no matter how I try my best, I will not write as well as they do. ”
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