March 2, 2021
These days, I've been thinking of buying my mom some fish and shrimp, but I haven't bought them yet. I usually wake up early, but I don't get up early. I get up before 8 am, wash my face and brush my teeth, and then have breakfast. Afterwards, I go to work. I don't go back home at noon. If I buy them at noon, I am afraid it will lose fresh when I take them home after a whole day's work. When I am off work in the afternoon, it is already 5:30. If I buy them at that time, it will be very late when I get home. According to this daily routine, I don't have enough time to go to the farmer's market, so I haven't bought my mom fish and shrimp yet. This morning I suddenly feel I am too stupid-because that is an easy thing to do. I just need to get up early to go to the farmer's market to buy them. This way, my mom can eat fish and shrimp at noon that day. Now it is 5:22 in the morning, I am going to get up and go to the farmer's market to buy them.
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These days, I've been thinking of buying my mom some fish and shrimp, but I haven't bought them yet.
I usually wake up early, but I don't get up early.
I get up before 8 am, wash my face and brush my teeth, and then have breakfast.
There is nothing wrong with what you wrote, but stylistically it sounds a little odd to end one sentence with "I don't get up early" and then begin the next with "I get up before 8 am", because the concepts of "not early" and "before" are kind of inconsistent. It would sound less odd if the second one began with "I get up around 7:45" or "I get up after 7:30", for example.
Afterwards, I go to work.
I don't go back home at noon.
If I buy them at noon, I am afraid ithey will losehave lost their freshness when I take them home after a whole day's work.
It has been a while since the "fish and shrimp" were mentioned, so it's not that easy to immediately understand what "them" means.
I would probably write something like "If I buy the seafood at noon..."
When I am off work in the afternoonfinish work, it is already 5:30.
Or "When I get off work"
The phrase "in the afternoon" doesn't really fit because "5:30" is too late for the afternoon.
You could say "When I finish in the evening, it is already 5:30"
If I buy them at that time, it will be very late whenby the time I get home.
Yours wasn't wrong, but I suggest a phrasing that I think sounds a little bit better.
According toBecause of this daily routine, I don't have enough time to go to the farmer's market, so I haven't bought my mom fish and shrimp yet.
We would not use "according to" here
This morning I suddenly feelt I am too stupid-because thatere is an easy thing to do.
I just need to get up early to go to the farmer's market to buy them.
This way, my mom can eat fish and shrimp at noon that day.
Now it is 5:22 in the morning, and I am going to get up and go to the farmer's market to buy them.
Need a conjunction between independent phrases (or a semi-colon)
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These days, I've been thinking of buying my mom some fish and shrimp, but I haven't bought them yet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I usually wake up early, but I don't get up early. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I get up before 8 am, wash my face and brush my teeth, and then have breakfast. I get up before 8 am, wash my face and brush my teeth, and then have breakfast. There is nothing wrong with what you wrote, but stylistically it sounds a little odd to end one sentence with "I don't get up early" and then begin the next with "I get up before 8 am", because the concepts of "not early" and "before" are kind of inconsistent. It would sound less odd if the second one began with "I get up around 7:45" or "I get up after 7:30", for example. |
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Afterwards, I go to work. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't go back home at noon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I buy them at noon, I am afraid it will lose fresh when I take them home after a whole day's work. If I buy them at noon, I am afraid It has been a while since the "fish and shrimp" were mentioned, so it's not that easy to immediately understand what "them" means. I would probably write something like "If I buy the seafood at noon..." |
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When I am off work in the afternoon, it is already 5:30. When I Or "When I get off work" The phrase "in the afternoon" doesn't really fit because "5:30" is too late for the afternoon. You could say "When I finish in the evening, it is already 5:30" |
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If I buy them at that time, it will be very late when I get home. If I buy them at that time, it will be very late Yours wasn't wrong, but I suggest a phrasing that I think sounds a little bit better. |
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According to this daily routine, I don't have enough time to go to the farmer's market, so I haven't bought my mom fish and shrimp yet.
We would not use "according to" here |
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This morning I suddenly feel I am too stupid-because that is an easy thing to do. This morning I suddenly fe |
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I just need to get up early to go to the farmer's market to buy them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This way, my mom can eat fish and shrimp at noon that day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now it is 5:22 in the morning, I am going to get up and go to the farmer's market to buy them. Now it is 5:22 in the morning, and I am going to get up and go to the farmer's market to buy them. Need a conjunction between independent phrases (or a semi-colon) |
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