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Feb. 19, 2021

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Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder. First there is limited shoulder movement, and then there are many pains. At first I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would be better itself, but it didn’t. A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased. But I think it is unscientific to just go for massages. It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan. This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to see.

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Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder.

First there is limited shoulder movement, and then there are many pains.

At first, I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would beget better by itself, but it didn’t.

A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased.

But I think it is unscientific to just go for massages.

It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan.

This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to seetake care of it.

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Really good, you write really well!

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Feb. 21, 2021

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Thank you very much.

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Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder.


Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder.

First there is limited shoulder movement, and then there are many pains.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would be better itself, but it didn’t.


At first, I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would beget better by itself, but it didn’t.

A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased.


A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased.

But I think it is unscientific to just go for massages.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan.


It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan.

This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to see.


This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to seetake care of it.

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