Feb. 26, 2021
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This topic makes me have to recall those tough days during the pandemic in 2020. Suddenly, with the pandemic breaking, everything becomes difficult. Shops closed, transportation stopped, people couldn't go out at their will. Even if you go shopping for some essential household items, you still have restrictions. If there was an advantage, and if it could be counted as an advantage, that is that you didn't need to go to the office anymore. We always want to escape from daily work and always want every day to be a holiday, but once all that comes true, like pandemic days, do you feel happy? Although you don't need to go to work and you are allowed to watch TV all day long at home, you definitely don't feel happy at all. So everything should be to a certain extent, too much or too little is all wrong. Fortunately, those tough days have passed, and I never ever hope it comes back again.
Journal
This topic makes me have to recall those tough days during the pandemic in 2020.
Suddenly, with the pandemic breaking, everything becoames difficult.
Since you are talking about last year, use the past tense verb.
Shops closed, transportation stopped, people couldn't go out at their will.
Even if you gowent shopping for some essential household items, you still haved restrictions.
Verb tense
If there was an advantage, and if it could be counted as an advantage, that iit was that you didn't need to go to the office anymore.
WeYou always want to escape from daily work and always want every day to be a holiday, but once all that comes true, like pandemic days, do you feel happy?
You could use either "we" or "you" all the way through this sentence and the next one, but it's better to be consistent with the subject. (Avoid switching between "we" and "you.")
So everything should be to a certain extentin moderation, too much or too little is all wrong.
"Everything in moderation" is an English idiom.
Fortunately, those tough days have passed, and I never ever hope ithope they never comes back again.
Feedback
This was clear and easy to understand. My main advice would be to be consistent with verb tense.
Feb. 26, 2021
Thank you very much
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This topic makes me have to recall those tough days during the pandemic in 2020. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Suddenly, with the pandemic breaking, everything becomes difficult. Suddenly, with the pandemic breaking, everything bec Since you are talking about last year, use the past tense verb. |
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Shops closed, transportation stopped, people couldn't go out at their will. Shops closed, transportation stopped, people couldn't go out at |
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Even if you go shopping for some essential household items, you still have restrictions. Even if you Verb tense |
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If there was an advantage, and if it could be counted as an advantage, that is that you didn't need to go to the office anymore. If there was an advantage, and if it could be counted as an advantage, |
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We always want to escape from daily work and always want every day to be a holiday, but once all that comes true, like pandemic days, do you feel happy?
You could use either "we" or "you" all the way through this sentence and the next one, but it's better to be consistent with the subject. (Avoid switching between "we" and "you.") |
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Although you don't need to go to work and you are allowed to watch TV all day long at home, you definitely don't feel happy at all. |
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So everything should be to a certain extent, too much or too little is all wrong. So everything should be "Everything in moderation" is an English idiom. |
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Fortunately, those tough days have passed, and I never ever hope it comes back again. Fortunately, those tough days have passed, and I |
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