Feb. 22, 2021
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I checked the Canada Provence of Saskatchewan, and said it has vast land, low cost of living and a superb environment. It is also one of the less demanding migration destinations highly recommended by China in recent years.
According to my imagination, the area where you live should resemble our Hulunbuir prairie in Inner Mongolia. The land is parsley populated, and the air is super good. Its area is larger than Jiangsu plus Shandong, but its population is only 2.53 million. The reason for the small population may be the cold winters (which can reach minus 30 or 40 degrees).
I think the better rural environment is in the Jiangnan area of China. I have been to southern Jiangsu and Northern Zhenjiang. The rural environment there is super good, with mountains and water, clean and tidy.
I don’t know if you have been to China before, but if possible, I do hope you come to see it as soon as possible. I believe that China will definitely leave you a beautiful impression.
I checked the Canada Pian proveince of Saskatchewan, and said it has vast land, low cost of living and a superb environment.
"and said" doesn't fit here very well but I'm not sure how to correct it because I'm not sure what you meant to say.
Perhaps: "I checked the Canadian province of Saskatchewan which has vast land...."
It is also one of the less demanding migration destinations highly recommended by China in recent years.
According to my imagination, the area where you live should resemble our Hulunbuir prairie in Inner Mongolia.
The land is sparslely populated, and the air is super good.
Its area is larger than Jiangsu plus Shandong, but its population is only 2.53 million.
The reason for the small population may be the cold winters (which can reach minus 30 or 40 degrees).
I think the better rural environment is in the Jiangnan area of China.
I have been to southern Jiangsu and Northern Zhenjiang.
The rural environment there is super good, with mountains and water, that are clean and tidy.
I don’t know if you have been to China before, but if possible, I do hope you come to see it as soon as possible.
I believe that China will definitely leave you with a beautiful impression.
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Feb. 26, 2021
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I checked the Canada Provence of Saskatchewan, and said it has vast land, low cost of living and a superb environment. I checked the Canad "and said" doesn't fit here very well but I'm not sure how to correct it because I'm not sure what you meant to say. Perhaps: "I checked the Canadian province of Saskatchewan which has vast land...." |
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It is also one of the less demanding migration destinations highly recommended by China in recent years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to my imagination, the area where you live should resemble our Hulunbuir prairie in Inner Mongolia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The land is parsley populated, and the air is super good. The land is spars |
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Its area is larger than Jiangsu plus Shandong, but its population is only 2.53 million. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The reason for the small population may be the cold winters (which can reach minus 30 or 40 degrees). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think the better rural environment is in the Jiangnan area of China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have been to southern Jiangsu and Northern Zhenjiang. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The rural environment there is super good, with mountains and water, clean and tidy. The rural environment there is super good, with mountains and water, that are clean and tidy. |
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I don’t know if you have been to China before, but if possible, I do hope you come to see it as soon as possible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I believe that China will definitely leave you a beautiful impression. I believe that China will definitely leave you with a beautiful impression. |
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