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March 12, 2021

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This evening when we after work went home, a colleague told me he didn't find his e-bike key in his office and he was worrying about if the key was left on his e-bike and if someone had already ridden the bike away. When we came to the bike parking, fortunately it didn't take long to find his bike, but the bike key wasn't on his bike. He thought if the key was still somewhere in the office or not, so he decided to go back to his office to find it again. We separated and I went to my car, but when I was about to start my car, I heard his greeting from behind. He told me that while he went back and looked at something around, a security guard was asking him what he was looking for. When he told the security guard the whole thing, the security guard told him the bike key was there, and also told him that an old man found his key on the ground and the old man picked it up and took it to the security guard in case someone looked for it. When he finished his explanation, we both felt happy. It is really a lucky thing.

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This evening when we went home after work went home, a colleague told me he didn't find his e-bike key in his office and he was worrying about if the key was left on his e-bike and if someone had already ridden the bike away.

When we came to the bike parking, fortunately it didn't take long to find his bike, but the bike key wasn't on his bike.

He thought/wondered if the key was still somewhere in the office or not, so he decided to go back to his office to find it again.

We separated and I went to my car, but when I was about to start my car, I heard his greeting from behind.

He told me that while he went back and looked at something around, a security guard was askingasked him what he was looking for.

When he told the security guard the whole thing, the security guard told him that the bike key was there, and also told him that an old man found his key on the ground and the old man, picked it up and took it to the security guard in case someone looked for it.

When he finished his explanation, we both felt happy.

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This evening when we after work went home, a colleague told me he didn't find his e-bike key in his office and he was worrying about if the key was left on his e-bike and if someone had already ridden the bike away.


This evening when we went home after work went home, a colleague told me he didn't find his e-bike key in his office and he was worrying about if the key was left on his e-bike and if someone had already ridden the bike away.

When we came to the bike parking, fortunately it didn't take long to find his bike, but the bike key wasn't on his bike.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He thought if the key was still somewhere in the office or not, so he decided to go back to his office to find it again.


He thought/wondered if the key was still somewhere in the office or not, so he decided to go back to his office to find it again.

We separated and I went to my car, but when I was about to start my car, I heard his greeting from behind.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He told me that while he went back and looked at something around, a security guard was asking him what he was looking for.


He told me that while he went back and looked at something around, a security guard was askingasked him what he was looking for.

When he told the security guard the whole thing, the security guard told him the bike key was there, and also told him that an old man found his key on the ground and the old man picked it up and took it to the security guard in case someone looked for it.


When he told the security guard the whole thing, the security guard told him that the bike key was there, and also told him that an old man found his key on the ground and the old man, picked it up and took it to the security guard in case someone looked for it.

When he finished his explanation, we both felt happy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is really a lucky thing.


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