Oct. 10, 2020
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In my memory, since I started work, I am always afraid that I may get fired. Our leader always threatens us by firing us if we don't work hard. We once studied hard to get a job, and I think it would be really terrible if I got fired because of my slack off. So, to avoid getting fired, I always work hard. Later, I have to think about it seriously. If I really get fired, what can I do, and can do better than my current work? So I decided to learn some things to support my living as an alternative in case. Many years have passed, fortunately, I didn't get fired. But now, I'm not afraid of that anymore. Although I can't be fired, I still work hard because that is what I should do.
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Your writing is really improving. One suggestion, try to minimize your words. To be a good writer, every word must have a purpose. Do not use words that are not necessary.
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In my memory, since I started work, I am always afraid that I may get fired.
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Our leader always threatens us by firing us if we don't work hard. Our leader always threatens |
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We once studied hard to get a job, and I think it would be really terrible if I got fired because of my slack off. We |
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So, to avoid getting fired, I always work hard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Later, I have to think about it seriously. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I really get fired, what can I do, and can do better than my current work? If I |
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So I decided to learn some things to support my living as an alternative in case. So I have decided to learn |
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Many years have passed, fortunately, I didn't get fired. Many years have passed, and fortunately |
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But now, I'm not afraid of that anymore.
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Although I can't be fired, I still work hard because that is what I should do.
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