March 2, 2021
I can't agree with you more, but one thing in learning a language I want to emphasize the most is to go all out. I often see many English learners in some learning groups or learning apps always writing and speaking in Chinese, which makes me very confused: do they really want to learn English? Maybe they are just for fun, or at least, they are not serious learners. So apart from patience, you have to go all out, taking every minute to study and immerse yourself completely in English. Let me take myself as an example: if no people are surrounded by me, I listen to English and write down what I have heard, as well as reading and speaking. If there are people around me, I write in English and post it in some apps so that native English speakers can correct them. Since I decided to learn English well in September 2019, I have never wasted a minute. As long as I have time, I will do those things I have told the above.
I can't agree with you more, but one thing in learning a language that I want to emphasize the most is to go all out.
1) "I can't agree with you more" - usage. What and who are you agreeing with?
2) "That" - stylistic. It emphasizes the thing you haven't mentioned yet.
I often see many English learners who are Chinese in some learning groups or learning apps always writing and speaking in Chinese, which makes me very confused: do they really want to learn English?
"Who are chinese" - stylistic. Even though you are presumably talking about native Chinese speakers, it sounds better to say so upfront.
Maybe they a're just forhaving fun, or at least, they are non't serious learners.
Instead, "...or at least, they aren't being serious" - stylistic, but it would be better since the first part of the sentence is "they're just having fun."
So apart from patience, you have to go all out, taking every minute to study and immerse yourself completely in English.
Let me takuse myself as an example: if no people are surarounded by me, I listen to English and write down what I ha've heard, as well as reading and speaking the language.
"Let me use myself" vs. "Take me as an example" - stylistic
If there are people around me, I write in English and post it in some apps so that native English speakers can correct them.
Since I decided to learn English wellseriously in September 2019, I have never wasted a minute.
1) Do you mean you started learning English at the end of September 2019? If so, "well into"
2) Do you mean you wanted to learn English as well as physically possible and that was in September 2019? If so, I think it's better to replace "well" with "seriously"
As long asWhenever I have time, I will do those things I have told the've said above.
1) "As long as" - stylistic, but sounds like you are saying you are dying
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Great English! I've tried to leave some comments that are more about style choices, to be honest.
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I can't agree with you more, but the one thing I want to emphasize in learning a language I want to emphasize the most isis the need to go all out.
I often see many English learners in some learning groups or learning apps always writing and speaking in Chinese, which makes me very confused: do they really want to learn English?
Maybe they are learning just for fun, or at least, they are not serious learners.
So apart from patience, you have to go all out,. You should takinge every minute you get to study and immerse yourself completely in English.
Let me take myself as an example: if no people are surarounded by me, I listen to English and write down what I have heard, as well as. I practice reading and speaking as well.
If there are people around me, I write in English and post it ion some apps so that native English speakers can correct theme.
them didn't really refer back to anything, so I chose 'me'.
If you wanted to say sentences than you would need to reference elsewhere in the sentence.
Since I decided to learn English well in September 2019, I have never wasted a minute.
As long as I have time, I will do those things I have told thesaid above.
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I can't agree with you more, but one thing in learning a language I want to emphasize the most is to go all out. I can't agree with you more, but the one thing I want to emphasize in learning a language I can't agree with you more, but one thing in learning a language that I want to emphasize the most is to go all out. 1) "I can't agree with you more" - usage. What and who are you agreeing with? 2) "That" - stylistic. It emphasizes the thing you haven't mentioned yet. |
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I often see many English learners in some learning groups or learning apps always writing and speaking in Chinese, which makes me very confused: do they really want to learn English? This sentence has been marked as perfect! I often see many English learners who are Chinese in some learning groups or learning apps always writing and speaking in Chinese, which makes me very confused: do they really want to learn English? "Who are chinese" - stylistic. Even though you are presumably talking about native Chinese speakers, it sounds better to say so upfront. |
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Maybe they are just for fun, or at least, they are not serious learners. Maybe they are learning just for fun, or at least, they are not serious learners. Maybe they Instead, "...or at least, they aren't being serious" - stylistic, but it would be better since the first part of the sentence is "they're just having fun." |
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So apart from patience, you have to go all out, taking every minute to study and immerse yourself completely in English. So apart from patience, you have to go all out This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Let me take myself as an example: if no people are surrounded by me, I listen to English and write down what I have heard, as well as reading and speaking. Let me take myself as an example: if no people are Let me "Let me use myself" vs. "Take me as an example" - stylistic |
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If there are people around me, I write in English and post it in some apps so that native English speakers can correct them. If there are people around me, I write in English and post it them didn't really refer back to anything, so I chose 'me'. If you wanted to say sentences than you would need to reference elsewhere in the sentence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since I decided to learn English well in September 2019, I have never wasted a minute. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Since I decided to learn English 1) Do you mean you started learning English at the end of September 2019? If so, "well into" 2) Do you mean you wanted to learn English as well as physically possible and that was in September 2019? If so, I think it's better to replace "well" with "seriously" |
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As long as I have time, I will do those things I have told the above. As long as I have time, I will do th
1) "As long as" - stylistic, but sounds like you are saying you are dying |
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