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Jack

Feb. 28, 2021

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I seldom drink tea. It's not because I don't want to, it is because drinking tea often makes me uncomfortable. Many of my colleagues like drinking tea. You can often see them holding a cup of tea and there were too many tea leaves in their cup. I also want to drink tea their way, but after I drink tea my stomach usually feels nauseated. Also, I rarely drink coffee. I am Chinese and I don't have the habit of drinking coffee. Once I smelled coffee and I felt it was very fragrant, so I drank some Nestle bagged coffee. It seems like I have drunk it for a long while, but later, after I drink it, I feel a little headache and can't fall asleep. The feeling doesn't happen just once, so I haven't drunk coffee for a long time. Usually I don't have the habit of drinking water unless I feel thirsty. When I am thirsty, I prefer drinking cold boiled water because I believe cold boiled water is the best drink for our health. Although I know drinking more water is good for one's health, I still don't have the habit. I just drink water when I am thirsty. Maybe each person is in a different situation and they are not suitable for the same rule. My mom doesn't often drink water, but she is already more than ninety years old.

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I seldom drink tea.

It's not because I don't want to, it is because drinking tea often makes me uncomfortable.

Many of my colleagues like drinking tea.

You can often see them holding a cup of tea and there werewith too many tea leaves in their cup.

It sounds slightly better this way, but I am not quite sure what you mean about too many tea leaves.

I also want to drink tea their way, but after I drink tea my stomach usually feels nauseated.

Also, I rarely drink coffee.

I am Chinese and I don't have'm not in the habit of drinking coffee.

Once I smelled coffee and I felt it was very fragrant, so I drank some Nestle bagged coffee.

It seems like I have drunk it for a long while, but later, after I drink it, I feelget a little headache and can't fall asleep.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'It seems I have drunk it for a long while'

The feeling doesn't happen justI've had this feeling more than once, so I haven't drunkhad coffee for a long time.

Usually I don't have'm not in the habit of drinking water unless I feel thirsty.

When I am thirsty, I prefer drinking cold boiled water because I believe cold boiled water is the bhealthiest drink for our health.

Although I know drinking more water is good for one's health, I am still don't havenot in the habit.

I just drink water when I am thirsty.

Maybe each person is in ahas different situation and they are not suitable for the same rul same rule doesn't apply to everyone.

My mom doesn't often drink water, but she is already more than ninety years old.

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Most of this was really great! When describing habits, it's better to say "I am in the habit of doing x".

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Jack

March 3, 2021

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You can often see them holding a cup of tea and there werewith too many tea leaves in their cup.

You can put a small amount of tea in your cup, and you can also put a large amount of tea in your cup. Or I can say this way, you prefer to drink strong tea but I like drinking light tea.

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Jack

March 3, 2021

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It seems like I have drunk it for a long while, but later, after I drink it, I feelget a little headache and can't fall asleep.

I drink that coffee about several months, so I think I have drink it for a long time. If I only drink it several days I don’t think I have drink it for a long time, instead I just say I drink it for a very short time.

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Jack

March 3, 2021

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I am in the habit of learning. Thank you very much.

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luella

March 4, 2021

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No problem! :D

In that case, I think it would be clearer to say 'a strong cup of tea' instead of 'a cup with too many leaves'.
And 'I feel like I've drunk coffee for a long while'

Have you ever tried tea with milk? I like it a lot

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Jack

March 5, 2021

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Never drink it. Thank you very much.

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I seldom drink tea.


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It's not because I don't want to, it is because drinking tea often makes me uncomfortable.


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Many of my colleagues like drinking tea.


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You can often see them holding a cup of tea and there were too many tea leaves in their cup.


You can often see them holding a cup of tea and there werewith too many tea leaves in their cup.

It sounds slightly better this way, but I am not quite sure what you mean about too many tea leaves.

I also want to drink tea their way, but after I drink tea my stomach usually feels nauseated.


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Also, I rarely drink coffee.


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I am Chinese and I don't have the habit of drinking coffee.


I am Chinese and I don't have'm not in the habit of drinking coffee.

Once I smelled coffee and I felt it was very fragrant, so I drank some Nestle bagged coffee.


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It seems like I have drunk it for a long while, but later, after I drink it, I feel a little headache and can't fall asleep.


It seems like I have drunk it for a long while, but later, after I drink it, I feelget a little headache and can't fall asleep.

I'm not sure what you mean by 'It seems I have drunk it for a long while'

The feeling doesn't happen just once, so I haven't drunk coffee for a long time.


The feeling doesn't happen justI've had this feeling more than once, so I haven't drunkhad coffee for a long time.

Usually I don't have the habit of drinking water unless I feel thirsty.


Usually I don't have'm not in the habit of drinking water unless I feel thirsty.

When I am thirsty, I prefer drinking cold boiled water because I believe cold boiled water is the best drink for our health.


When I am thirsty, I prefer drinking cold boiled water because I believe cold boiled water is the bhealthiest drink for our health.

Although I know drinking more water is good for one's health, I still don't have the habit.


Although I know drinking more water is good for one's health, I am still don't havenot in the habit.

I just drink water when I am thirsty.


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Maybe each person is in a different situation and they are not suitable for the same rule.


Maybe each person is in ahas different situation and they are not suitable for the same rul same rule doesn't apply to everyone.

My mom doesn't often drink water, but she is already more than ninety years old.


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