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China has 350 million smokers, ranking first in the world. Everyone who smokes wants to give up smoking, but it is too difficult. The survey shows that the success rate of quitting smoking only by perseverance can only reach 3%. Although I don't smoke much, I have been smoking for decades, and I have always been on the way to give up smoking. Recently, I obviously realized that my body has not allowed me to smoke any more, so I must give up smoking. I know I can't do it with my own perseverance, so I checked some auxiliary drugs on the Internet. After many comparisons, I finally chose Pfizer's Chang Pei. A starter pack is for two weeks, but I quit smoking after eating it in the first week. The feeling of not smoking is super good: breathing smoothly, being clear-headed and concentrating. I never thought I was so stupid for smoking for decades! If you are a smoker and have always wanted to quit but haven't quit, please try Chang Pei. It will definitely make you succeed.

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China has 350 million smokers, ranking first in the world.

Everyone who smokes wants to give up smoking, but it is too difficult.

TheA survey shows that the success rate of quitting smoking only byusing perseverance can only reach 3%.

If multiple surveys show this, you could say "Surveys show that ..."

Although I don't smoke much, I have been smoking for decades, and I have always been on the way to give up smoking.

Your meaning is a little unclear:
Possible Meaning 1: You have always been trying to give up smoking, but you weren't successful in the past. In this case, you can say, "I have perpetually been trying, unsuccessfully, to give up smoking."

Possible Meaning 2: You have been in the process of giving up smoking for a long time, with gradual success. In this case, you can say, "I started the process of quitting smoking a long time ago."

Recently, I obviously realized that my body haswill not allowed me to smoke any more, so I must give up smoking.

I know I can't do it with my ownsolely using perseverance, so I checkedsearched for some auxiliary drugs on the Internet.

After many comparisons, I finally chose Pfizer's Chang Pei.

A starter pack is forlasts two weeks, but I quit smoking after eattaking it in the firstfor one week.

The feeling of not smoking is super good: breathing smoothly, being clear-headed and concentrating.

I never thought I was so stupid for smoking for decades!

If you mean to say you didn't realize the negative impact of smoking while you were a smoker, you have to say, "I never realized how stupid I was for smoking for decades!" Although, I don't think that makes you stupid - smoking is addictive and a hard habit to break!! Don't be so hard on yourself :)

If you are a smoker and have always wanted to quit but haven't quit, please try Chang Pei.

It will definitely make you succeed.

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Congratulations on quitting smoking!!

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countersass

Feb. 17, 2021

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Congrats on quitting! I used to smoke as well and am very proud of you!

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Jack

Feb. 17, 2021

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Although I don't smoke much, I have been smoking for decades, and I have always been on the way to give up smoking.

Meaning 1 is right

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Jack

Feb. 17, 2021

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I never thought I was so stupid for smoking for decades!

I never realized how stupid I was for smoking for decades!
Thank you very much.

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Jack

Feb. 17, 2021

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Thank you for correcting me.

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Jack

Feb. 17, 2021

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Congrats on quitting! I used to smoke as well and am very proud of you!

Thank you for your comments

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China has 350 million smokers, ranking first in the world.


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Everyone who smokes wants to give up smoking, but it is too difficult.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The survey shows that the success rate of quitting smoking only by perseverance can only reach 3%.


TheA survey shows that the success rate of quitting smoking only byusing perseverance can only reach 3%.

If multiple surveys show this, you could say "Surveys show that ..."

Although I don't smoke much, I have been smoking for decades, and I have always been on the way to give up smoking.


Although I don't smoke much, I have been smoking for decades, and I have always been on the way to give up smoking.

Your meaning is a little unclear: Possible Meaning 1: You have always been trying to give up smoking, but you weren't successful in the past. In this case, you can say, "I have perpetually been trying, unsuccessfully, to give up smoking." Possible Meaning 2: You have been in the process of giving up smoking for a long time, with gradual success. In this case, you can say, "I started the process of quitting smoking a long time ago."

Recently, I obviously realized that my body has not allowed me to smoke any more, so I must give up smoking.


Recently, I obviously realized that my body haswill not allowed me to smoke any more, so I must give up smoking.

I know I can't do it with my own perseverance, so I checked some auxiliary drugs on the Internet.


I know I can't do it with my ownsolely using perseverance, so I checkedsearched for some auxiliary drugs on the Internet.

After many comparisons, I finally chose Pfizer's Chang Pei.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A starter pack is for two weeks, but I quit smoking after eating it in the first week.


A starter pack is forlasts two weeks, but I quit smoking after eattaking it in the firstfor one week.

The feeling of not smoking is super good: breathing smoothly, being clear-headed and concentrating.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I never thought I was so stupid for smoking for decades!


I never thought I was so stupid for smoking for decades!

If you mean to say you didn't realize the negative impact of smoking while you were a smoker, you have to say, "I never realized how stupid I was for smoking for decades!" Although, I don't think that makes you stupid - smoking is addictive and a hard habit to break!! Don't be so hard on yourself :)

If you are a smoker and have always wanted to quit but haven't quit, please try Chang Pei.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It will definitely make you succeed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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