Feb. 28, 2021
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I have different hobbies during different periods. When I was a child, I liked playing catapult and it seemed that most of my childhood was spent with catapult. Even when I attended the middle school entrance exam, I still carried a catapult. When I was in middle school, my biggest hobby was getting up late. I don't know why I liked sleeping so much back then, especially in the morning. If there were no rules about the time of getting up, I would sleep until noon. When I got a job, my hobby was hanging out with friends and doing nothing all day long. Every time I think of that period, I always regret wasting a lot of time. But now I think I have good hobbies and one of them is studying. I don't think I should continue wasting time now. On the contrary, I should find back the time I have wasted. I am very happy to have good hobbies and I always feel satisfied with those positive hobbies.
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I've haved different hobbies during different periods of time.
When I was a child, I liked playing catapult and it seemed that most of my childhood was spent withplaying catapult.
Even when I attended the middle school entrance exam, I still carried a catapult.
When I was in middle school, my biggest hobby was getting up late.
I don't know why I liked sleeping so much back then, especially in the morning.
If there were no rules aboutfor the time of getting up, I would sleep until noon.
You're sentence is correct but this way sounds better to me.
When I got a job, my hobby was hanging out with friends and doing nothing all day long.
Every time I think of that period, I always regret wasting a lot of time.
But now I think I have good hobbies and one of them is studying.
I don't think I should continue wasting time now.
On the contrary, I should find back the time I have wasted.
I am very happy to have good hobbies and I always feel satisfied with those positive hobbies.
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Well written, just a few small errors.
Feb. 28, 2021
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I have different hobbies during different periods. I've ha |
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When I was a child, I liked playing catapult and it seemed that most of my childhood was spent with catapult. When I was a child, I liked playing catapult and it seemed that most of my childhood was spent |
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Even when I attended the middle school entrance exam, I still carried a catapult. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was in middle school, my biggest hobby was getting up late. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't know why I liked sleeping so much back then, especially in the morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If there were no rules about the time of getting up, I would sleep until noon. If there were no rules You're sentence is correct but this way sounds better to me. |
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When I got a job, my hobby was hanging out with friends and doing nothing all day long. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every time I think of that period, I always regret wasting a lot of time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But now I think I have good hobbies and one of them is studying. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't think I should continue wasting time now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the contrary, I should find back the time I have wasted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am very happy to have good hobbies and I always feel satisfied with those positive hobbies. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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