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I first went to Beijing with a few of my colleagues in 1996. We visited the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, Tiananmen, and the 13 mausoleums.

This time, I came to Beijing alone for personal reasons. Yesterday afternoon, I visited the summer palace again, and Yuanming Yuan park.

This morning, I am going to visit the Badaling Great Wall. I hope it will be a joyful trip.

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I first went to Beijing with a few of my colleagues in 1996.

We visited the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, Tiananmen, and the 13 mausoleums.

This time, I came to Beijing alone for personal reasons.

Yesterday afternoon, I visited the summer palace again, and Yuanming Yuan park.

This morning, I am going to visit the Badaling Great Wall.

I hope it will be a joyful trip.

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Jack

Aug. 9, 2023

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I first went to Beijing with a few of my colleagues in 1996.

We visited the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, Tiananmen, and the 13 mausoleums.

This time, I came to Beijing alone for personal reasons.

Yesterday afternoon, I visited the summer palace again, and Yuanming Yuan park.

This morning, I am going to visit the Badaling Great Wall.

I hope it will be a joyful trip.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Aug. 9, 2023

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Thank you very much.

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I first went to Beijing with a few of my colleagues in 1996.

We visited the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, Tiananmen, and the 13 mausoleums.

This time, I came to Beijing alone for personal reasons.

Yesterday afternoon, I visited the summer palace again, and I also visited Yuanming Yuan park.

This morning, I am going to visit the Badaling Great Wall.

I hope it will be a joyful trip.

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Jack

Aug. 8, 2023

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Thank you very much.

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