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July 21, 2023

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The games that I played in my childhood.

Catching cicadas. In summer, there were many cicadas in the countryside. One of my favorite games was catching cicadas.

There were a few methods to catch cicadas. The most simple and easy one was this: prepared a long and slim bamboo first, then took some wheat flour to make "glue." When I made the wheat flour "glue", I mixed water and the wheat flour and repeatedly stirred it until it became sticky.

After the "glue" was done, I grabbed a little bit of the "glue" and attached it to the small and thin end of the bamboo that was prepared before.

Then, I could use the bamboo to catch cicadas. I used my two hands to hold the thick end of the bamboo. Whenever I found a cicada on a tree, I touched the cicada's wings with the "glue" that was on the thin end of the bamboo. Then the cicada was caught.

Have you played this game in your childhood?

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The games that I played in my childhood.

You can also use "used to" to talk about something that has not continued to the present: "The games I used to play in my childhood."

Catching cicadas.

In the summer, there were many cicadas in the countryside.

There were a few methods to catch cicadas.

You can also use: "There were a few methods (to catching / of capturing) cicadas."

The most simple and easy one was this: prepared a long and slim bamboo first, then took some wheat flour to make "glue."

The simplest and easiest one was the following: I first prepared a long and slender bamboo and then took some wheat flour to make "glue".

When I made the wheat flour "glue", I mixed water and the wheat flour and repeatedly stirred itstirred it repeatedly until it became sticky.

Best to place repeatedly here: "When I made the wheat flour "glue", I mixed water and the wheat flour and stirred it repeatedly until it became sticky."

After the "glue" was done, I grabbed a little bit of the "glue" and attached it to the small and thin end of the bamboo that was prepared before.

You are correct. You can also use: "Once the "glue" was ready, I took a little bit of the "glue" and attached it to the small and thin end of the bamboo that I had prepared earlier/before."

Then, I could use the bamboo to catch cicadas.

I used my two hands to hold the thick end of the bamboo.

Can also say: "I held the thick end of the bamboo with both hands."

Whenever I found a cicada on a tree, I touched the cicada's wings with the "glue" that was on the thin end of the bamboo.

Then the cicada was caught.

HaveDid you played this game in your childhood?

Best to say: "Did you play this game in your childhood?"

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Jack

July 22, 2023

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Thank you very much. You gave me many alternatives and I appreciate them.

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In the summer, there were many cicadas in the countryside.

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Very good! Barely any mistakes.
I didn't know you could catch cicadas.

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July 21, 2023

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The games that I played in my childhood.


The games that I played in my childhood.

You can also use "used to" to talk about something that has not continued to the present: "The games I used to play in my childhood."

Catching cicadas.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In summer, there were many cicadas in the countryside.


In the summer, there were many cicadas in the countryside.

In the summer, there were many cicadas in the countryside.

One of my favorite games was catching cicadas.


There were a few methods to catch cicadas.


There were a few methods to catch cicadas.

You can also use: "There were a few methods (to catching / of capturing) cicadas."

The most simple and easy one was this: prepared a long and slimy bamboo first, then took some wheat flour to make "glue."


When I made the wheat flour "glue", I mixed water and the wheat flour and repeatedly stirred it until it became sticky.


When I made the wheat flour "glue", I mixed water and the wheat flour and repeatedly stirred itstirred it repeatedly until it became sticky.

Best to place repeatedly here: "When I made the wheat flour "glue", I mixed water and the wheat flour and stirred it repeatedly until it became sticky."

After the "glue" was done, I grabbed a little bit of the "glue" and attached it to the small and thin end of the bamboo that was prepared before.


After the "glue" was done, I grabbed a little bit of the "glue" and attached it to the small and thin end of the bamboo that was prepared before.

You are correct. You can also use: "Once the "glue" was ready, I took a little bit of the "glue" and attached it to the small and thin end of the bamboo that I had prepared earlier/before."

Then, I could use the bamboo to catch cicadas.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used my two hands to hold the thick end of the bamboo.


I used my two hands to hold the thick end of the bamboo.

Can also say: "I held the thick end of the bamboo with both hands."

Whenever I found a cicada on a tree, I touched the cicada's wings with the "glue" that was on the thin end of the bamboo.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then the cicada was caught.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Have you played this game in your childhood?


HaveDid you played this game in your childhood?

Best to say: "Did you play this game in your childhood?"

The most simple and easy one was this: prepared a long and slim bamboo first, then took some wheat flour to make "glue."


The most simple and easy one was this: prepared a long and slim bamboo first, then took some wheat flour to make "glue."

The simplest and easiest one was the following: I first prepared a long and slender bamboo and then took some wheat flour to make "glue".

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