Jan. 25, 2023
I don’t wanna complain about my life , recently I’ve thought a lot of thing about my life ,from my childhood until now.
why did I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about my previous half of life.?
First ,I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned out the current situation in my life.
Second, I always believe everything happened with a reason . So I try to find out the reason that make up a person like me .
Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .
What are my problems. Or what do I usually worried about ?
1,I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is a job that I don’t feel so much stressful ,and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad
Beside that I can also learn something new in this job.
2, I’m a social person ,I need to communicate with some other people , if I just stay at home alone ,I would feel lonely .
3, I’m a litte bit anxious about the things that still not happen or will never happen.
4, I alway wanna have a skill that I can reach my goals immediattly, even though I know such a skill is not existent. If you feel anxious about the future ,it means you just wanna skip the process that guide you to your dream .
jJournal
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"Wanna" is slang so I'll correct your entry accordingly.
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First , I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned outled to the current situation in my life.
Second, I always believe everything happened withs for a reason .
So I'll try to find out the reasons that make up a person like me .
Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .
What are my problems.?
Or what do I usually worriedy about ?
1,. I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is. It will be a job thatwhere I dwon’t feel so much stressful , and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad.
We use periods instead of commas when listing numbers in the US.
Besides that I can also learn something new in this job.
2,. I’m a social person. ,I need to communicate with some other people , i. If I just stay at home alone ,I would, I will feel lonely .
3,. I’m a little bit anxious about the things that stillhave not happened or will never happen.
4, I always wanna have a skill thatwhere I can reach my goals immediattely, even though I know such a skill idoes not existent.
If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wanna skip the process that guides you to your dream .
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Good work and good luck! I think you're on the right path.
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I don’t wannat to complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot of things about my life ,from my childhood until now.
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First , I wannat to figure out what did I experienced that turned outcaused the current situation in my life.
Second, I always believe everything happened withs for a reason .
So I try to find out the reasons that make up a person like me .
Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .
What are my problems.?
Or what do I usually worriedy about ?
1,. I always wannat to have a relatively good job , it is: a job that I don’t feel so much stressful ,ed about, and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad.
Beside that, I can also learn something new in this job.
2,. I’m a social person. ,I need to communicate with some other people , i. If I just stay at home alone ,I , I would feel lonely .
3,. I’m a little bit anxious about the things that still nohaven't happened yet or will never happen.
4,. I alway wannawant to have a skill that I canwould let me reach my goals immediattely, even though I know such a skill idoes not existent.
If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wannat to skip the process that guides you to your dream .
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"Wanna" is fine in texting or informal conversation, but usually in long-form writing like this, it's more correct to spell out "want to".
jJournal
I don’t wanna complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot of thing about my life , I’ve been thinking a lot of it, from my childhood until now.
wWhy dido I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about mythe previous half of life.
First , I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned outled to the current situation in my life.
Second, I've always believe d that everything happened withs for a reason .
So I try to find out the reason that make s up a person like me .
What are my problems.?
1,One, I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is a. A job that I don’t feel so much stressful , and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist non't bad.
2Two, I’m a social person , I need to communicate with some other people , if I just stay at home alone , I would feel lonely .
3Three, I’m a little bit anxious about the things that still not happen or will never happen.
4, Four, I always wannat to have a skill that I canwill let me reach my goals immediattlysoon, even though I know such a skill is not nexistent.
If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wanna skip the process that guide you to your dream .
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Great job. A couple of notes:
1. "Wanna" is a fine term to use but only for when you're making a more active statement. Like, "I wanna go sky jumping." It shouldn't be used all the time.
2. Stylistically, I think it would be better to write the numbers. Or, you could label it like I did. With a period (.) rather than a comma (,)
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First ,I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned out the current situation in my life. First First First |
Second, I always believe everything happened with a reason . Second, I've always believe Second, Second, |
So I try to find out the reason that make up a person like me . So I try to find out the reason that make So I try to find out the reasons that make So I'll try to find out the reasons that make |
Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem . Third, I thought it would help me Third, I thought it would help me to find |
What are my problems. What are my problems What are my problems What are my problems |
Or what do I usually worried about ? Or what do I usually worr Or what do I usually worr |
1,I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is a job that I don’t feel so much stressful ,and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad
1 1 We use periods instead of commas when listing numbers in the US. |
Beside that I can also learn something new in this job. Beside that, I can also learn something new Besides that I can also learn something new |
2, I’m a social person ,I need to communicate with some other people , if I just stay at home alone ,I would feel lonely .
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3, I’m a litte bit anxious about the things that still not happen or will never happen.
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4, I alway wanna have a skill that I can reach my goals immediattly, even though I know such a skill is not existent.
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If you feel anxious about the future ,it means you just wanna skip the process that guide you to your dream . If you feel anxious about the future If you feel anxious about the future If you feel anxious about the future |
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