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floria3949

Jan. 25, 2023

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I don’t wanna complain about my life , recently I’ve thought a lot of thing about my life ,from my childhood until now.


why did I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about my previous half of life.?
First ,I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned out the current situation in my life.
Second, I always believe everything happened with a reason . So I try to find out the reason that make up a person like me .
Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .



What are my problems. Or what do I usually worried about ?
1,I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is a job that I don’t feel so much stressful ,and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad
Beside that I can also learn something new in this job.
2, I’m a social person ,I need to communicate with some other people , if I just stay at home alone ,I would feel lonely .
3, I’m a litte bit anxious about the things that still not happen or will never happen.
4, I alway wanna have a skill that I can reach my goals immediattly, even though I know such a skill is not existent. If you feel anxious about the future ,it means you just wanna skip the process that guide you to your dream .

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jJournal

I don’t wanna complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot ofabout thing abouts in my life ,from my childhood until now.

"Wanna" is slang so I'll correct your entry accordingly.

wWhy did I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about mythe previous half of my life.?

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First , I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned outled to the current situation in my life.

Second, I always believe everything happened withs for a reason .

So I'll try to find out the reasons that make up a person like me .

Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .

What are my problems.?

Or what do I usually worriedy about ?

1,. I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is. It will be a job thatwhere I dwon’t feel so much stressful , and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad.

We use periods instead of commas when listing numbers in the US.

Besides that I can also learn something new in this job.

2,. I’m a social person. ,I need to communicate with some other people , i. If I just stay at home alone ,I would, I will feel lonely .

3,. I’m a little bit anxious about the things that stillhave not happened or will never happen.

4, I always wanna have a skill thatwhere I can reach my goals immediattely, even though I know such a skill idoes not existent.

If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wanna skip the process that guides you to your dream .

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Good work and good luck! I think you're on the right path.

journal

I don’t wannat to complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot of things about my life ,from my childhood until now.

wWhy did I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories aboutof my previous half of life.?

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First , I wannat to figure out what did I experienced that turned outcaused the current situation in my life.

Second, I always believe everything happened withs for a reason .

So I try to find out the reasons that make up a person like me .

Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .

What are my problems.?

Or what do I usually worriedy about ?

1,. I always wannat to have a relatively good job , it is: a job that I don’t feel so much stressful ,ed about, and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad.

Beside that, I can also learn something new in this job.

2,. I’m a social person. ,I need to communicate with some other people , i. If I just stay at home alone ,I , I would feel lonely .

3,. I’m a little bit anxious about the things that still nohaven't happened yet or will never happen.

4,. I alway wannawant to have a skill that I canwould let me reach my goals immediattely, even though I know such a skill idoes not existent.

If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wannat to skip the process that guides you to your dream .

Feedback

"Wanna" is fine in texting or informal conversation, but usually in long-form writing like this, it's more correct to spell out "want to".

jJournal

I don’t wanna complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot of thing about my life , I’ve been thinking a lot of it, from my childhood until now.

wWhy dido I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about mythe previous half of life.

First , I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned outled to the current situation in my life.

Second, I've always believe d that everything happened withs for a reason .

So I try to find out the reason that make s up a person like me .

What are my problems.?

1,One, I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is a. A job that I don’t feel so much stressful , and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist non't bad.

2Two, I’m a social person , I need to communicate with some other people , if I just stay at home alone , I would feel lonely .

3Three, I’m a little bit anxious about the things that still not happen or will never happen.

4, Four, I always wannat to have a skill that I canwill let me reach my goals immediattlysoon, even though I know such a skill is not nexistent.

If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wanna skip the process that guide you to your dream .

Feedback

Great job. A couple of notes:

1. "Wanna" is a fine term to use but only for when you're making a more active statement. Like, "I wanna go sky jumping." It shouldn't be used all the time.

2. Stylistically, I think it would be better to write the numbers. Or, you could label it like I did. With a period (.) rather than a comma (,)

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floria3949

Jan. 25, 2023

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Thank you so much for your correction

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jJournal

I don’t wanna complain about my life , recently I’ve thought a lot of thing about my life ,from my childhood until now.


I don’t wanna complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot of thing about my life , I’ve been thinking a lot of it, from my childhood until now.

I don’t wannat to complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot of things about my life ,from my childhood until now.

I don’t wanna complain about my life , r. Recently I’ve thought a lot ofabout thing abouts in my life ,from my childhood until now.

"Wanna" is slang so I'll correct your entry accordingly.

why did I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about my previous half of life.


wWhy dido I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about mythe previous half of life.

wWhy did I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories aboutof my previous half of life.?

wWhy did I do so much self-reflection and recall my memories about mythe previous half of my life.?

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First ,I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned out the current situation in my life.


First , I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned outled to the current situation in my life.

First , I wannat to figure out what did I experienced that turned outcaused the current situation in my life.

First , I wanna figure out what did I experienced that turned outled to the current situation in my life.

Second, I always believe everything happened with a reason .


Second, I've always believe d that everything happened withs for a reason .

Second, I always believe everything happened withs for a reason .

Second, I always believe everything happened withs for a reason .

So I try to find out the reason that make up a person like me .


So I try to find out the reason that make s up a person like me .

So I try to find out the reasons that make up a person like me .

So I'll try to find out the reasons that make up a person like me .

Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .


Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .

Third, I thought it would help me to find a solution to solve my problem .

What are my problems.


What are my problems.?

What are my problems.?

What are my problems.?

Or what do I usually worried about ?


Or what do I usually worriedy about ?

Or what do I usually worriedy about ?

1,I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is a job that I don’t feel so much stressful ,and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad


1,One, I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is a. A job that I don’t feel so much stressful , and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist non't bad.

1,. I always wannat to have a relatively good job , it is: a job that I don’t feel so much stressful ,ed about, and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad.

1,. I always wanna have a relatively good job , it is. It will be a job thatwhere I dwon’t feel so much stressful , and the work environment and the relationship between colleagues ist not bad.

We use periods instead of commas when listing numbers in the US.

Beside that I can also learn something new in this job.


Beside that, I can also learn something new in this job.

Besides that I can also learn something new in this job.

2, I’m a social person ,I need to communicate with some other people , if I just stay at home alone ,I would feel lonely .


2Two, I’m a social person , I need to communicate with some other people , if I just stay at home alone , I would feel lonely .

2,. I’m a social person. ,I need to communicate with some other people , i. If I just stay at home alone ,I , I would feel lonely .

2,. I’m a social person. ,I need to communicate with some other people , i. If I just stay at home alone ,I would, I will feel lonely .

3, I’m a litte bit anxious about the things that still not happen or will never happen.


3Three, I’m a little bit anxious about the things that still not happen or will never happen.

3,. I’m a little bit anxious about the things that still nohaven't happened yet or will never happen.

3,. I’m a little bit anxious about the things that stillhave not happened or will never happen.

4, I alway wanna have a skill that I can reach my goals immediattly, even though I know such a skill is not existent.


4, Four, I always wannat to have a skill that I canwill let me reach my goals immediattlysoon, even though I know such a skill is not nexistent.

4,. I alway wannawant to have a skill that I canwould let me reach my goals immediattely, even though I know such a skill idoes not existent.

4, I always wanna have a skill thatwhere I can reach my goals immediattely, even though I know such a skill idoes not existent.

If you feel anxious about the future ,it means you just wanna skip the process that guide you to your dream .


If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wanna skip the process that guide you to your dream .

If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wannat to skip the process that guides you to your dream .

If you feel anxious about the future , it means you just wanna skip the process that guides you to your dream .

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