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Jack

Nov. 18, 2022

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28 days of working in the quarantine location finally ended. Some of my coworkers even worked there for over 40 days.

During the quarantine, my coworkers and I were also not allowed out of the building. We also quarantined ourselves while managing the quarantine for others.

I don't want to give any comments to the police about the quarantine. I don't have the right either.

It's not interesting at all. It's boring and somber. If people worked there for a long time, they would have mental problems.

Anyway, those tough days have completely gone. I hope there will never ever be any quarantine in the days to come.

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28Twenty-eight days of working inat the quarantine location has finally ended.

We don't often begin sentences with numbers and are actively discouraged when we're in school.

Some of my coworkers even worked there for over 40 days.

During the quarantine, my coworkers and I were also not allowed out of the building.

We also quarantined ourselves while managing the quarantine for others.

I don't want to give any comments to the police about the quarantine.

I don't have the right either.

It's not interesting at all.

It's boring and somber.

If people worked there for a long time, they would havedevelop mental problems.

Anyway, those tough days haveare now completely gone.

I hope there will never ever be any more quarantine procedures in the days to come.

Feedback

I'm sorry to hear you had to go through this. It's good it's over. Again, this is also well-written.

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Jack

Nov. 19, 2022

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Thank you very much.

28 days of working in the quarantine locationfacility (have) finally ended.

Some of my coworkers even worked there for over 40 days.

During the quarantine, my coworkers and I were also not allowed out of the building.

We also quarantined ourselves while managing the quarantine ofor others.

I don't want to give any comments to the police about the quarantine.

I don't have the right to do so, either.

It's not interesting at all.

It's boring and somber.

If people worked there for a long time, they would have (would develop) mental problems.

Anyway, those tough days have completely gone (completely passed).

I hope there will never ever be anyother quarantine in the days to come.

"Never ever" doesn't work with "in the days to come."

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Jack

Nov. 19, 2022

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谢谢你的修改。你告诉了我不同的选择。

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JoeTofu

Nov. 19, 2022

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> 你告诉了我不同的选择。
抱歉,我看不懂……

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Jack

Nov. 19, 2022

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我的意思是,同一句话你让我知道有不同的表述,而且都是对的。如果你直接把A改成B我可能以为A是错的,但你只是在括号里给了我另一种表达,所以我知道两种表达都是正确的。

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JoeTofu

Nov. 19, 2022

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啊,我明白了,谢谢你

The 28 days of working in the quarantine locationhas finally ended.

Some of my coworkers ehaven worked there for over 40 days.

During the quarantine, my coworkers and I were also not allowed out ofto leave the building.

We also quarantined ourselves while managing the quarantine for others.

I don't want to give any comments to the police about the quarantine.

I don't have the right to, either.

It's not interesting at all.

It's boring and sombermundane.

If people worked there for atoo long time, they would havedevelop mental problems.

Anyway, those tough days have completely goneare over.

I hope there will never everot be anyother quarantine in the days to come.

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28 days of working in the quarantine location finally ended.


The 28 days of working in the quarantine locationhas finally ended.

28 days of working in the quarantine locationfacility (have) finally ended.

28Twenty-eight days of working inat the quarantine location has finally ended.

We don't often begin sentences with numbers and are actively discouraged when we're in school.

Some of my coworkers even worked there for over 40 days.


Some of my coworkers ehaven worked there for over 40 days.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During the quarantine, my coworkers and I were also not allowed out of the building.


During the quarantine, my coworkers and I were also not allowed out ofto leave the building.

During the quarantine, my coworkers and I were also not allowed out of the building.

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We also quarantined ourselves while managing the quarantine for others.


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We also quarantined ourselves while managing the quarantine ofor others.

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I don't want to give any comments to the police about the quarantine.


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I don't have the right either.


I don't have the right to, either.

I don't have the right to do so, either.

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It's not interesting at all.


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It's boring and somber.


It's boring and sombermundane.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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If people worked there for a long time, they would have mental problems.


If people worked there for atoo long time, they would havedevelop mental problems.

If people worked there for a long time, they would have (would develop) mental problems.

If people worked there for a long time, they would havedevelop mental problems.

Anyway, those tough days have completely gone.


Anyway, those tough days have completely goneare over.

Anyway, those tough days have completely gone (completely passed).

Anyway, those tough days haveare now completely gone.

I hope there will never ever be any quarantine in the days to come.


I hope there will never everot be anyother quarantine in the days to come.

I hope there will never ever be anyother quarantine in the days to come.

"Never ever" doesn't work with "in the days to come."

I hope there will never ever be any more quarantine procedures in the days to come.

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