July 14, 2022
Journal
Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I have kept going hiking so far.
I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM. After I get off bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.
There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there. Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer. When I am hiking, I will play music using my phone.
After I end the hiking, I will stretch my hands and legs. I learn those stretching methods online.
When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.
I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening everyday. After the lesson, I go hiking one more time.
Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.
I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel it is very helpful for my body.
I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.
Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I have kept going hiking so far.
You can also use 6th instead of sixth
After I get ofut of bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.
When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.
I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the eveningpm everyday.
More concise
Journal
Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I ha’ve kept going hiking so far.
This sounds more natural in the US.
I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM.
After I get ofut of bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.
In the US, we get out of bed. It's a set phrase.
There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there.
Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer.
When I a'm hiking, I wi'll play music usingon my phone.
or
When I'm hiking, I listen to music on my phone.
or
When I'm hiking, I listen to music.
(We assume you're using your phone because that's what a lot of people do these days.)
After I end th'm done hiking, I will stretch mydo hands and leg stretches.
This sounds more natural in the US.
or
After I'm done hiking, I do stretches on my hands and legs.
I learn those stretching methodsed how to stretch online.
This sounds more natural in the US.
I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening every day.
After the lesson, I go hiking one more time.
Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.
I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel it is very helpfullike it's good for my body.
This sounds more natural in the US.
I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.
Feedback
Great job!
July 14, 2022
Thank you very much
Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I’ve kept going hiking.
I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM. After I get out of bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.
There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there. Before I start hiking, I set a thirty minute timer. When I’m hiking, I’ll play music on my phone.
After I’m done hiking, I do hand and leg stretches. I learned how to stretch online.
When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.
I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening every day. After the lesson, I go hiking one more time.
Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.
I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel like it’s good for my body.
I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.
July 14, 2022
Thank you very much Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I’ve kept going hiking. I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM. After I get out of bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking. There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there. Before I start hiking, I set a thirty minute timer. When I’m hiking, I’ll play music on my phone. After I’m done hiking, I do hand and leg stretches. I learned how to stretch online. When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed. I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening every day. After the lesson, I go hiking one more time. Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers. I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel like it’s good for my body. I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.
Good work!
Journal
Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I have kept going hikinggone hiking everyday so far.
I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM.
After I get ofut of bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.
There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking in therem.
Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer.
Why?
When I am hiking, I will play music using my phone.
After I end thefinish hiking, I will stretch my handarms and legs.
Repeated actions can use present tense construction, and future tense is not needed.
I learned those stretching methods online.
When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.
I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening everyday.
After the lessons, I go hiking one more time.
Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.
I have been hiking everyday for 8 days and I feel it is very helpful for my bodyhealth.
Or: physique, fitness, etc.
I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.
Feedback
Well written, and used a variety of grammar structures. Good work
July 14, 2022
Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer.
To be sure that I hike for enough time.
July 14, 2022
Thank you very much
Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I’ve gone hiking every day so far.
I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM. After I get out of bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking.
There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking in them. Before I start hiking, I set a thirty minute timer. When I’m hiking, I play music on my phone.
After I finish hiking, I stretch my arms and legs. I learned how to stretch online.
When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed.
I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening every day. After the lessons, I go hiking one more time.
Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers.
I have been hiking every day for 8 days and I feel like it’s good for my health.
I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise.
July 15, 2022
To be sure that I hike for enough time.
Then "Before I start hiking..." Would be better. This way sounds like you wait 30 mins then start
|
Journal This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I have kept going hiking so far. Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I have Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I This sounds more natural in the US. Since I left the hospital on the sixth of this month, I have kept going hiking so far. You can also use 6th instead of sixth |
|
I usually wake up between 5 and 6 AM. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
After I get off bed, I wash my face and brush my teeth, and then go hiking. After I get o After I get o In the US, we get out of bed. It's a set phrase. After I get o |
|
There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking there. There are many beautiful parks here and I often go hiking in the This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Before I start to go hiking, I will set a thirty minute timer. Before I start to go hiking, I Why? Before I start |
|
When I am hiking, I will play music using my phone. When I am hiking, I When I or When I'm hiking, I listen to music on my phone. or When I'm hiking, I listen to music. (We assume you're using your phone because that's what a lot of people do these days.) |
|
After I end the hiking, I will stretch my hands and legs. After I Repeated actions can use present tense construction, and future tense is not needed. After I This sounds more natural in the US. or After I'm done hiking, I do stretches on my hands and legs. |
|
I learn those stretching methods online. I learned those stretching methods online. I learn This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
When I am doing the stretch, my muscles hurt, but after stretching, I feel relaxed and refreshed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! When I |
|
I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening everyday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 in the evening every day. I have regular lessons from 6:30 to 7:20 More concise |
|
After the lesson, I go hiking one more time. After the lessons, I go hiking one more time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Each time, I will hike 35 minutes at a high speed, about 3900 steps and roughly 2.7 kilometers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel it is very helpful for my body. I have been hiking everyday for 8 days and I feel it is very helpful for my Or: physique, fitness, etc. I have been hiking for 8 days and I feel This sounds more natural in the US. |
|
I hope everyone attaches great importance to exercise because life depends on exercise. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium