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Jack

Feb. 25, 2021

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I didn't book a parking space in my community. Every time I enter or go out of my community, the entrance guard always asks me for parking fees. Each time the entrance guard wants to charge me, I have to take a lot of time to negotiate with them. It is a lot of trouble to do this every time I enter or go out of my community, so I bought an open parking space.

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I didn't bookreserve a parking space in my community.

In (American) English, we more commonly use the verb "reserve" when talking about parking spaces.

Every time I enter or go out of my community, the entrance guard always asks me for parking fees.

Each time the entrance guard wants to charge me, I have to takespend a lot of time to negotiateing with them.

It is a lot of trouble to do this every time I enter or go out of my community, so I bought an open parking space.

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I didn't book a parking space in my community.


I didn't bookreserve a parking space in my community.

In (American) English, we more commonly use the verb "reserve" when talking about parking spaces.

Every time I enter or go out of my community, the entrance guard always asks me for parking fees.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Each time the entrance guard wants to charge me, I have to take a lot of time to negotiate with them.


Each time the entrance guard wants to charge me, I have to takespend a lot of time to negotiateing with them.

It is a lot of trouble to do this every time I enter or go out of my community, so I bought an open parking space.


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