July 9, 2022
Journal
I haven't sung for years. Today, I decided to learn to sing again.
I think singing is good for my health because it can increase my vital capacity and exercise my heart and lung function.
The song I started to learn is "Shepherd of Keketuohai". Behind this song is a beautiful loving story.
Keketuohai is a beautiful place in the Xinjiang autonomous region. Winding rivers, majestic mountains, wild apricot flowers and lush trees component a fabulous scenery.
The love story took place between a shepherd and a bee-breading girl. The shepherd looked for grass land and the bee-breading girl went flowing flowers. They met and had good feelings for each other, but unfortunately, they separated in the end.
The lyrics of this song are very touching. Let me try to translate it into English for you.
"Shepherd of Keketuohai"
The rain that night couldn't stay you.
The wind in the valley accompanied me to cry.
Your camel bell seems to still ring in my ears.
Tell me you have been here before.
The wine I brew can't intoxicate myself.
But the song you sang made me drunk.
I am willing to accompany you over the snowy mountains and across the Gobi.
But you left without saying goodbye and cut off all the news from you.
Sweetheart, I'll wait for you in Keketuohai.
They said you were married in Yili.
Is it because there is a beautiful Nalati there?
Or only the apricot flowers there could brew the honey sweet you want.
There are camel bells ringing outside the yurt again.
I know it's definitely not you.
No one can sing a song as touching as you.
There is no other beautiful girl that I can't forget.
Journal
I haven't sung for years.
Today, I decided to learn to sing again.
I think singing is good for my health because it can increase my vital capacity and exercise my heart and lung functions.
I'm actually not sure about this one. If you have found a counterexample, discount this correction.
The song I started to learn is "Shepherd of Keketuohai".
Behind this song is a beautiful loving story.
Keketuohai is a beautiful place in the Xinjiang autonomous region.
Winding rivers, majestic mountains, wild apricot flowers and lush trees componentse a fabulous scenery.
The love story tookakes place between a shepherd and a bee-breading girl.
The shepherd looked for grass land and the bee-breading girl went flowgathering flowers.
I'm not sure what you meant by "flowing", so I just guessed.
They met and had goodeveloped feelings for each other, but unfortunately, they separated in the end.
A "good" feeling isn't really used in a romantic sense. It means more like, my intuition is telling me that this is a good choice. If you leave the "good" out then it means romantic feelings.
Also, it makes more sense to say they developed feelings for each other since those feelings developed during the song/story. Saying they "had" feelings would suggest that the feelings existed from the very beginning.
The lyrics of this song are very touching.
Let me try to translate it into English for you.
"Shepherd of Keketuohai"
The rain that night couldn't stayop you.
I'm not sure what you mean by "stay", so I just guessed.
The wind in the valley accompanied me to crycried with me.
You can't use accompany with another verb.
Your camel bell still seems to still ring in my ears.
Just sounds a little better to me this way.
Tell me you have been here before.
The wine I brew can't intoxicate myselfe.
"Myself" is reflexive, so only you can or can't intoxicate yourself
But the song you sang made me drunk.
I am willing to accompany you over the snowy mountains and across the Gobi.
But you left without saying goodbye and cut off all the news from youcommunication.
This one is also difficult. But I don't think I've ever heard of someone cutting off "news". Cutting off communication sounds much better.
Sweetheart, I'll wait for you in Keketuohai.
They said you were married in Yili.
Is it because there is a beautiful Nalati there?
Or only the apricot flowers there could brew the honey sweetsweet honey you want.
There are camel bells ringing outside the yurt again.
I know it's definitely not you.
No one can sing a song as touching as you.
There is no other beautiful girl that I can't forget.
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That's a beautiful song. It makes me a bit emotional. And I'm sure it even sounds much better in your native language (Mandarin?).
July 9, 2022
The shepherd looked for grass land and the bee-breading girl went flowgathering flowers.
Sorry, I mean “following”. She is always going to where flowers are blooming.
July 9, 2022
They met and had goodeveloped feelings for each other, but unfortunately, they separated in the end.
Thank you very much for the detailed explanations.
July 9, 2022
The rain that night couldn't stayop you.
The meaning of this sentence is that the shepherd wishes the rain could stop the girl leaving, but she still goes away.
July 9, 2022
Yes, you are right. In mandarin, the lyrics are much better.
I haven't sung for years. Today, I decided to learn to sing again.
I think singing is good for my health because it can increase my vital capacity and exercise my heart and lung functions.
The song I started to learn is "Shepherd of Keketuohai". Behind this song is a beautiful loving story.
Keketuohai is a beautiful place in the Xinjiang autonomous region. Winding rivers, majestic mountains, wild apricot flowers and lush trees compose fabulous scenery.
The love story takes place between a shepherd and a bee-breading girl. The shepherd looked for grass land and the bee-breading girl went following flowers. They met and developed feelings for each other, but unfortunately, they separated in the end.
The lyrics of this song are very touching. Let me try to translate it into English for you.
"Shepherd of Keketuohai"
The rain that night couldn't stop you.
The wind in the valley cried with me.
Your camel bell still seems to ring in my ears.
Tell me you have been here before.
The wine I brew can't intoxicate me.
But the song you sang made me drunk.
I am willing to accompany you over the snowy mountains and across the Gobi.
But you left without saying goodbye and cut off all communication.
Sweetheart, I'll wait for you in Keketuohai.
They said you were married in Yili.
Is it because there is a beautiful Nalati there?
Or only the apricot flowers there could brew the sweet honey you want.
There are camel bells ringing outside the yurt again.
I know it's definitely not you.
No one can sing a song as touching as you.
There is no other beautiful girl that I can't forget.
July 10, 2022
Sorry, I mean “following”. She is always going to where flowers are blooming.
Then in that case you can say: "the bee-breading girl followed the flowers"
One more thing: "grass land": should be "grassland"
July 10, 2022
Thank you very much for the detailed explanations.
You're welcome!
July 10, 2022
The meaning of this sentence is that the shepherd wishes the rain could stop the girl leaving, but she still goes away.
Okay, then "stop" is the right word
July 11, 2022
Thank you very much for sending me the feedbacks.
July 11, 2022
Thank you very much for sending me the feedbacks.
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You're welcome!
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They met and had good feelings for each other, but unfortunately, they separated in the end. They met and A "good" feeling isn't really used in a romantic sense. It means more like, my intuition is telling me that this is a good choice. If you leave the "good" out then it means romantic feelings. Also, it makes more sense to say they developed feelings for each other since those feelings developed during the song/story. Saying they "had" feelings would suggest that the feelings existed from the very beginning. |
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The rain that night couldn't stay you. The rain that night couldn't st I'm not sure what you mean by "stay", so I just guessed. |
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